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Old 11-26-2009, 02:44 PM   #1
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Lyrics

Okay guys I made some lyrics that I thought would go well with some brutal gore metal riffs. The song is called ***** In The Ass By A Chainsaw. Here goes hehe:

I'm disembowling you,
Like a piece of poo,
I drink your blood,
You fucking mud,
I desecrate your grave, You will not be saved.

*solo*

Raaaaaaabreeeebreeeeooohaaaarghhhsnortsnortbreeeee ebreeee

Deeeeeaaaaaatttthhhh!

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So what do you guys think? Brutal huh? Some constructive critism will be appreciated.
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Old 11-26-2009, 02:46 PM   #2
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snortsnort
This was the only moderately good part, the rest was utter rubbish.
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Old 11-26-2009, 02:53 PM   #3
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Like...a piece....of poo.....
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Old 11-26-2009, 03:01 PM   #4
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This was the only moderately good part, the rest was utter rubbish.
That was the whole point you idiot. I was not serious in any way whatsoever. Denser than Mercury, I swear...
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Old 11-26-2009, 03:03 PM   #5
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That was the whole point you idiot. I was not serious in any way whatsoever. Denser than Mercury, I swear...
And here I play nice and insinuate on your drug-thread and all. Hmpf, todays youth. If I ever find my copy of sarcasm that irony stole, I'll let you have it.
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Old 11-26-2009, 03:06 PM   #6
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Horrible use of sarcasm...
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