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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books. |
01-06-2009, 07:55 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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After The Date
The date had gone well. She was gorgeous and, after a classy dinner, full of spectacular conversation, had invited him home with her. They sat on the couch, completely infatuated with anything but what was on the television. It was at this moment that he noticed the change.
Something about the way her kisses tasted began to upset him and he pulled away. Crows feet had appeared on her face that were not there before. Her skin itself seemed to have taken on a slack appearance and a shiny texture.
"Are you okay?" he asked.
"I was about to ask you the same thing. Why'd you stop?"
He took her by the hand and decided it was all in his head and leaned forward to kiss her again. The scent coming off her hit him like a wall. Some sort of acrid, unsettling vapor. He looked at her again. Her skin was wrinkling and sagging before his eyes, as if it had come loose from the meat. He looked down at their hands and noticed that her hands were covered in boils. One of them burst and the puss splashed onto his arm.
He recoiled in horror. The puss was burning him. She giggled, "Sorry, it happens sometimes". What the fuck was going on here? As he looked at her, more boils rose beneath her skin and oozed through her clothing.
He ran to the bathroom to rinse off the puss from his arm. How was it burning? How was this woman alive with this shit inside her? There was no way that this was happening. "Hey! You don't want to get it wet!" she called in a sing-song voice from the other room. He turned on the faucet and the splashed some water with his hand onto his arm. With a searing hiss and incredible pain his entire arm exploded from his body, blood, muscle and bone making a mess of the wash room.
He was screaming, incoherent with madness as she entered the room and turned on the shower. With gentle care she wrapped her arms around him, the puss getting all over him, burning him through his clothing. "You're so good to me" she whispered, her skin now hanging like a loose paper bag around her bones, the acrid odor burning his nostrils, and slowly dragged him, screaming in hysteria, weak with blood loss, toward the running shower.
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01-06-2009, 07:57 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Namibia
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Wow. How many guys did she have to fuck to get THAT?
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01-06-2009, 08:02 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Thelema
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You like? It's from a dream I had.
Why are there two of these?
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01-06-2009, 09:35 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Louisiana
Posts: 1,311
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Nice fucked up little dream there.
Reminds me of the old Tales from the Crypt show.
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01-07-2009, 10:12 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Hesperus, CO
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truly twisted and yet an enjoyable read
drop some feed on my "I The Reaper..." piece, Filth
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01-07-2009, 01:43 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Earth.
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It's an interesting idea, but you need to expand it for it to be worth anything.
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01-07-2009, 02:05 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: R'lyeh
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Haha.
Seriously man, write more stuff based on dreams.
I love this stuff=]
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Terror Nuclear,Terror Nuclear
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01-07-2009, 02:29 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
Posts: 1,044
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Lets all act like malice and post gay smileys! =] =] =]
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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01-07-2009, 02:48 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: R'lyeh
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Please do imitate me.
I get off on shit like that.
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"One mohawk wasn't enough to keep up with how badass he is so he had to get two." - Haunted House, about me, YEAH, ME!
Terror Nuclear,Terror Nuclear
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01-07-2009, 02:55 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
Posts: 1,044
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Malice In Wonderland
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Illiterate worm is illiterate.
__________________
The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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01-07-2009, 05:02 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Jakarta, Indonesia
Posts: 69
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have more nice dreams like this, i want to read more
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