weird poetry

[manequin]

ok. from time to time I lose it a little bit and write something like this. Most of it makes no sense whatsoever. DOnt look for deep meaning for you will find none. Dont flame it for not being emotional because it isn't ment to be. I know it's terrible as poetry but perhaps some of you will enjoy the novelty value.

Somethings eating away inside
Toubling me
Hurting me
Somethings missing
somethings wrong
Been gone for far too long...

SUnshine flavoured lolipops
taste the sky!
Majikal pot plants...
Growing fast
way too fast!
Kermit says it aint easy being green
Majikal pot plants know what he means...
Sunshine flavoured lolipops
Blind you in the eye!
Pretty little whitty things
Learning how to cry...


Derek is the grand master
ruling over cheesey poofs
Derek is the grand master
He has a really cool hat!


SUnshine flavoured lolipops
taste the sky!
Majikal pot plants...
Growing fast
way too fast!
Kermit says it aint easy being green
Majikal pot plants know what he means...
Sunshine flavoured lolipops
Blind you in the eye!
Pretty little whitty things
Learning how to cry...


I think the flux capasator has broken
Why didnt marty mcfly go see Jesus?
He could have fixed the flux capacator...

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[JCC]

That wasn't weird poetry. It was someone deliberately trying to seem off-beat and quirky and it falls under the mass of its own pretension as a result.

[Underwater Ophelia]

Yeah, this is pretty stupid.
Just try writing poetry naturally, don't try to make it all "cool" and "trippy," because it's really transparent.

[Despanan]

If you want to write stream of conciousness, write stream of conciousness. It's very obvious that you're just stringing together a bunch of ideas to sound "zany".

I mean seriously, no one writes worse poetry than goths (except you and emos) and even we see throught this shit.

[Deatharren]

agree with the guy above

[Ishan]

Uh ... is there supposed to be a rainbow connection with the Kermit reference? Smoke another!

[I Am Great.]

I rule at this shit.

[cradle]

Try harder.