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Old 11-13-2005, 01:47 AM   #1
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Check out my new poems

On my site I put up a page of poetry. Don't think I'm just going through a mild spat or wierdness or something, I'm always like this.

http://www.tehfunniescomics.com/penis/poems.html

Take a look, tell me what you think. See if you can figure some of my symbolism.
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Old 11-13-2005, 01:50 AM   #2
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There is already a poetry thread, n00b.

Also there is a shill section...

Try one of the two.

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Old 11-13-2005, 01:55 AM   #3
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a friend of Project1369 aka Mr Mounts....

Follow the fucking rules.
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Old 11-13-2005, 02:04 AM   #4
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I'm too great to follow rules.
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Old 11-13-2005, 02:16 AM   #5
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Matt, that has yet to be seen.

Your poems are quite atrocious. i don't blame you for not posting them in the poetry thread. You get points for having enough intelligence to know better.

As for the rest of the site, i shall not venture any further in fear of my IQ may dwindle for i have just recently regained those points i lost while toying with Nick.
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Old 11-13-2005, 04:40 PM   #6
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My apologies, I just assumed that sharing pain was a good idea.
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Old 11-14-2005, 06:02 AM   #7
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HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa. The spite filled wit, the peusdo intellectuals condensation, or the just plaine fucking pathetic poetry. To who does the grand prize of humour go to?

Frolics are amusing but so is some one shitting themselves in public. Shed your suit of motely if you want any one to listen to you. If not poste this shit where more people can see it.
lmao... Condensation? Might you perhaps mean condescension?
Yeah, 'twas what I thought.
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Old 12-01-2005, 10:43 PM   #8
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lmao... Condensation? Might you perhaps mean condescension?
Yeah, 'twas what I thought.
hurray for...dewy and/or raining psuedo intellectuals?? lol
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Old 12-03-2005, 11:58 AM   #9
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Those poems are horrible! I feel like my eyes have been r*ped by a staple remover. Maybe you should read some classic poetry to get a general idea on what it is before trying to write your own.
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