verbi tui me iratum fecit??? Little sense he makes, but he's a gothicus, so he's forgiven. Sorry to have caused you pain, but now that you have mentioned Horace, his wisdom might help you improve:
[...] nulla placere diu nec vivere carmina possunt quae scribuntur aquae potoribus.
So try drinking more wine instead of water, that seems to have worked well for Catullus, too, hehe.
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