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Old 12-12-2009, 08:44 AM   #26
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She asked for somebody to explain why it wasn't a good poem.

Like I said, she wasn't looking for praise. You were a prick.

Explain why it wasn't a good poem.


It took you two sentences to even get to explaining why it was bad and even then you didn't explain why, the first two were spent flaming her. Then you ended it on a self-indulgent note.

There's being constructive, then there's just being an asshole.
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Old 12-12-2009, 08:54 AM   #27
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Like I said, she wasn't looking for praise. You were a prick.

Explain why it wasn't a good poem.


It took you two sentences to even get to explaining why it was bad and even then you didn't explain why, the first two were spent flaming her. Then you ended it on a self-indulgent note.

There's being constructive, then there's just being an asshole.
I did explain why the poem was bad. The idea was unoriginal, so she had to carry it by writing it well, which she didn't do. So the poem failed. How do you propose I break this news to her in a nice way?
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Old 12-12-2009, 08:56 AM   #28
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I did explain why the poem was bad. The idea was unoriginal, so she had to carry it by writing it well, which she didn't do. So the poem failed. How do you propose I break this news to her in a nice way?
You just did, actually...

"The idea was unoriginal, so she had to carry it by writing it well, which she didn't do."

If you had constructed it like that, it would have come across a HELL of a lot less inflammatory...
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Old 12-12-2009, 02:18 PM   #29
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I'm going to try my own hand at psychoanalysis: Maverick is butthurt that I destroyed him in that thread about global warming and rather than face the harsh reality that he is a slobbering neanderthal and I am a radiant demi-god, he would rather try and convince people that I am the problem to divert the attention away from his complete lack of mental faculty.
No, you're a fucking ******. Lets stick to facts here Please.

Noirette your poem is shit. Why? It just is. No message.
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