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Old 08-29-2009, 10:20 PM   #1
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Cool Emma Died/ Lyrical Poem

Gemma died
Gemma died
her life was
just a suicide
suicide
suicide
you cannot seem to realize

hesitating, mesmerize
the ocean waits here
for darkness and blue skies
I cannot concentrate here

Gemma died
Gemma died
Gemma she died
You know you didn't cry

heal the hellion
Babble of Babylon
Only the ideal
So subliminal is your creation

Waves away
The decades power play
They build
Their towers of stone

Gemma
Don't cry
Demigods
Can't lie awake

She will lie at night
They can't die without light

Somewhere you know
The truth is over
The rainbow
The rainbow

I stole the kisses
I have the witness
I am the sunshine
And you are all of mine

So don't waste
your time
beating the brick
as it holds you in place
don't hesitate
let the fluid fill your lungs
drown in what you've sung

emma died
emma died
her life was just a suicide
she had come to realize
the skies had eyes to see
you drowning
in your song
you were wrong
you were wrong
about me

emma
emma
emma
emma
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Old 08-31-2009, 07:40 PM   #2
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Could do as a song I guess. (Granted a lot of songs that make it contain frivolous drivel)
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Old 08-31-2009, 07:47 PM   #3
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I don't understand what you're trying to say in it.
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Old 09-02-2009, 06:40 PM   #4
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Laaaaaaaame
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Old 09-02-2009, 10:57 PM   #5
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Gemma died
Gemma died
her life was
just a suicide
suicide
suicide
you cannot seem to realize

hesitating, mesmerize
the ocean waits here
for darkness and blue skies
I cannot concentrate here

Gemma died
Gemma died
Gemma she died
You know you didn't cry

heal the hellion
Babble of Babylon
Only the ideal
So subliminal is your creation

Waves away
The decades power play
They build
Their towers of stone

Gemma
Don't cry
Demigods
Can't lie awake

She will lie at night
They can't die without light

Somewhere you know
The truth is over
The rainbow
The rainbow

I stole the kisses
I have the witness
I am the sunshine
And you are all of mine

So don't waste
your time
beating the brick
as it holds you in place
don't hesitate
let the fluid fill your lungs
drown in what you've sung

emma died
emma died
her life was just a suicide
she had come to realize
the skies had eyes to see
you drowning
in your song
you were wrong
you were wrong
about me

emma
emma
emma
emma
Oh for pity's sake...
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Old 09-04-2009, 04:16 PM   #6
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Old 09-05-2009, 04:37 PM   #7
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You're beautiful Alan...that was so worthless.
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Old 09-05-2009, 04:39 PM   #8
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I don't understand what you're trying to say in it.

Sometimes it's cool to be enigmatic. People don't understand you. But yeah the rainbow part wasn't 'amazing'.

I wish more people spoon fed dribble.
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Old 09-05-2009, 04:39 PM   #9
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Laaaaaaaame
Yeah. Lame.
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Old 09-08-2009, 05:32 PM   #10
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I wish more people spoon fed dribble.

Spoon fed dribble?
What on earth are you referring to?
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Old 09-09-2009, 03:13 AM   #11
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Spoon fed dribble?
What on earth are you referring to?
someone's comment that they changed.
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