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Old 12-10-2010, 09:38 AM   #1
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Dope, Ash, and War

Disgraceful smears wiped clean with a blade
Draining from your lifeless vagabond mind
Black silence of madness, for insanity I wait
Such a gentle murder, in time; infected waste.

It’s not blood I lust for though yours I take!
Only this vague remorse; a pity I fake.
Deadened by the night specter of my false grace
I stand above your angelic face-crack-whore junkie
Loving every scorn of an absolute monkey;

Freeing my demons and letting them rise
Dancing to a dope’s possessing chant
Doing things to you, that you cannot allow
And smiling because no one knows how.

Because the best way to control the host
Is to drink the piss they leave in your wake
This is my revelation: the piss of a loser
And drinking in divine retaliation for your sake!

Mostly because, your life is amusing…
So brittle, fragile, so wanting of love
And I am an asshole you cannot live for
And I am an asshole you’ll never adore.

This salvation is a neuro-toxin of simplicity
I wish I could slip my blade into your wrist
Jesus Christ, you’re no fucking Anarchist
Mass produced tasteless fucking life...
Here is my promise, here is the knife.

As we dress for another tragic reunion
Is it not unnatural to feel the starvation?
For the beauty of their amplified lore
Give me more and more
It’s your flesh I adore…
Evil, twisting and turning temporarily into a whore
Never submitting to promises given

Instead, sacrifice your swollen lips to the fruit
To bring your mouth to the apple’s kiss
And it has such an incestuous taste
Remember it’s ok to be blinded by smoke
Once you realize the truth, and purpose
Of every minute that passes;

Lazily we crash, an astronomical path
Suffer no more for your Keeper’s Abuses!
The master is you! This is your voice!
Infinite creature of spell-bound wisdom
Can you stop the cataclysmic cycle
Or will you surrender your smile to sell

Open those lips to exhale;
Once we fault ourselves; enslaved to A Thing
Our Souls can be no avail anyways
And so we are constantly battling
For our raging, disturbances
Like a Hurricane in silence

--A lover of violence--
And in this affair we surrender

wisdom for the moral delusion
Driving swords into the skin
For it shall free the Angel sleeping
Soundlessly within
An immortalized core; proving nothing but that thing
we once were.
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Old 12-10-2010, 09:25 PM   #2
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You really suck...
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Old 12-14-2010, 06:59 PM   #3
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You really suck...
If that's the extent of your vocab then I imagine you suck more dick than Heath Ledger in heaven.

Fudge sucking cocksmucking creeper!

You're entertaining the delusion that I care, obviously, what anyone thinks on this forum about me. After trying to get me to slice my wrists while I laughed my ass off at you internet bullies. Pity you'll eventually reap the darkness that you crave, in hell. go to hell. I can write better stories with my ass than you could invoke on LSD.

And just because I like to ramble...because I enjoy making fun of idiots like you. I'm not taking this the wrong way, but seriously come on.

"You suck?"

How about you "cunt go kill yourself and choke and die and etc and etc and etc I'm a gawthic loser." How about "I'm a punk on an ego-trip and I have no life so I get my kicks out of annoying teenage girls on chatsites"

and I'm sure you're a porn addict, man what a waste. You're face is more comical than your two-faced attempt at three words.

Sorry? No. I'm not sorry. No. Not at all. In fact. You're my entertainment. Watching you try to insult me is like watching a chicken barbecued to a crisp.

HA. HA. HA.
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Old 12-14-2010, 07:40 PM   #4
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Woah, sugartits, I know that you really care and you're really into me and all, but damn girl... you've gotta get the foot off the gas a bit.

I don't mind aggression, but you're looking kinda sex crazed and retard strong and that makes my baby Jesus kinda cry.
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Old 12-14-2010, 07:49 PM   #5
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I'm not into you.
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Old 12-14-2010, 07:54 PM   #6
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I hate wanker-muts like you. That's right, this shit is getting serious. Read my internet forum lips: YOU ARE PRETTY MUCH THE SAME FUCKING THING OVER AND OVER AGAIN SHUT UP YOU ANNOY ME.
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Old 12-14-2010, 07:57 PM   #7
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What did I tell you? If you want my affections, you're going to have to take it a little slower. I know you're crazy about me but DAMN.
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Old 12-14-2010, 08:01 PM   #8
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You don't have to tell me anything, I can read you like a book. How's this for slow, you just post BS because you don't comprehend what it's like to live. I have the feeling you don't even leave the house and no I have no feelings for you, other than pity. Because I pity bullies, I've been bullied a lot in my life. It makes me sad that people like you still do it and find it funny.
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Old 12-14-2010, 08:05 PM   #9
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And that's why you fucking annoy me. So stop commenting on my poems. BTW my username is irony, if you didn't get it. It's about the fact society doesn't know what it means to have a mind.
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Old 12-14-2010, 08:17 PM   #10
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