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Old 12-06-2011, 02:35 AM   #1
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Unhappy Existance

while i just sit, staring at an empty screen
wondering my existence in the bleak sad world
a smoke in one and a drink in the other
pondering whats stopping me from jumping off the tiny stool
the rope alredy tied and hung in the dark
the light reflecting off the sleak nylon braid
cant stand the exsistance of my shaky right knee
stuck on the bed not able to move
cant even breath without reprocussions from hell.

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Old 12-06-2011, 09:51 AM   #2
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It was from the deepest darkness that the rumbling bellowed
It was dark because it was darkness and there was no light, which made it dark.

What are 'reprocussions'?
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Old 12-06-2011, 10:07 AM   #3
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They are a lot like Repercussions only from the seventies. Oh wait, that's retrocussions. Disregard all I've said.
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Old 12-06-2011, 10:17 AM   #4
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So, it's not like a reproduction of 'cussions'?
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Old 12-06-2011, 10:20 AM   #5
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I googled it and according to some sources reprocussions is an acceptable internet substitute for repercussions.
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Old 12-06-2011, 10:23 AM   #6
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What? Fuck that shit!
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Old 12-06-2011, 10:31 AM   #7
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That's what I said. Only it stayed in my head so I guess I thought it. Only it was really loud and I'm sure someone else heard it even though I only thought it.
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Old 12-06-2011, 11:18 AM   #8
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If you say something and no one else hears you, did you really talk?

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Old 12-06-2011, 11:34 AM   #9
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Yes, unless a tree fell down at the same time.
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Old 12-06-2011, 11:41 AM   #10
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So in other words, if he's a lumberjack, then he's okay?
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Old 12-06-2011, 12:00 PM   #11
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Reprocussion-an effect or result, often indirect or remote, of some event or action
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Old 12-06-2011, 01:14 PM   #12
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Old 12-06-2011, 01:38 PM   #13
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Quote:
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Reprocussion-an effect or result, often indirect or remote, of some event or action
Look! I can do it too:
Repercussion- An often indirect effect, influence, or result that is produced by an event or action.
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Old 12-08-2011, 10:19 AM   #14
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If you say something and no one else hears you, did you really talk?

In my experience, the answer is yes. I spout so much nonsense in my every waking hour that people rarely listen anymore.

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Old 12-08-2011, 10:57 AM   #15
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Wait there is still this one!!!
Reapurcusions- An often indirect effect, influence, or result that is produced by an event or action.
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Old 12-08-2011, 01:32 PM   #16
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I still prefer retrocussion- an effect, influence or result produced by an eventor action from the seventies.
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Old 12-08-2011, 06:41 PM   #17
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What about reapercussions, An often indirect effect, influence, or result that is produced by an event or action of Death?
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Old 12-09-2011, 10:07 AM   #18
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Or repersecutions- An often indirect effect, influence, or result that is produced by an event or action of ill-treatment?
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Old 12-09-2011, 10:19 AM   #19
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Whatevs, I don't fear the reapercussions.

*ba-dum-tsh*
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Old 12-09-2011, 10:40 AM   #20
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Nicely punned there graus.
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Old 12-09-2011, 11:10 AM   #21
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I'm a walking pun, the joke that gets itself.
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