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03-10-2011, 08:07 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Uniontown, Kentucky
Posts: 334
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Worthless
No one cares.
No one wants me.
I am useless,
Pathetic,
A worthless nobody.
Wandering these empty streets,
Looking for what I know,
Does not exist.
My hearts ceases to beat,
So I reach inside myself,
And pull it out.
I hold it at eye level,
And open my mouth,
Screaming,
I HATE YOU!!!!,
YOU ARE WORTHLESS!!!
I throw it against the wall,
And watch it burst,
I utter a small chuckle,
And fall to the floor,
smiling,
At the fact that,
I am finally free.
Free from the shackles,
That once bound me to the wall,
free,
At last.
I close my tired eyes,
Never to open them again.
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03-10-2011, 09:13 AM
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#2
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Join Date: Aug 2009
Posts: 2,932
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Man, do you orgasm when you say the word "pathetic"?
I can't imagine another reason to use it so much.
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Originally Posted by KissMeDeadly
You fucking people [war veterans] are only a step below entitled rich kids, the only difference being you had to do and witness horrible things, instead of being given everything.
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real classy
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03-10-2011, 10:22 AM
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#3
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Uniontown, Kentucky
Posts: 334
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Alan
Man, do you orgasm when you say the word "pathetic"?
I can't imagine another reason to use it so much.
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I enjoy the word because it describes many of the people in this world.
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03-10-2011, 10:29 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Chicago, Illinois
Posts: 2,670
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Ah, I remember teenage angst. The only difference between you and me is I started shooting heroin instead of writing bad poetry. My way was much more productive if ya ask me.
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You should talk you fugly, cat bashing, psychopathic urinal on two legs...
-Jack_the_knife
I don't hate you. Saying I hate you would be like saying I hate a dog with no legs trying to cross a busy freeway.
-Mr. Filth
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03-10-2011, 10:40 AM
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#5
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Uniontown, Kentucky
Posts: 334
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Quote:
Originally Posted by PortraitOfSanity
Ah, I remember teenage angst. The only difference between you and me is I started shooting heroin instead of writing bad poetry. My way was much more productive if ya ask me.
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Heroin is not the way to go. Marijuana is the only good drug out there. And teenage angst?! Because of that heroin you shot up you will probably undergo it again once you reach your fourties.
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03-10-2011, 10:49 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Chicago, Illinois
Posts: 2,670
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LOL. Yea, maybe if I have to keep reading your poetry... Other than that, I'm good.
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You should talk you fugly, cat bashing, psychopathic urinal on two legs...
-Jack_the_knife
I don't hate you. Saying I hate you would be like saying I hate a dog with no legs trying to cross a busy freeway.
-Mr. Filth
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03-10-2011, 11:16 AM
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#7
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Uniontown, Kentucky
Posts: 334
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My poetry has nothing to do with your drug usage.
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03-10-2011, 04:49 PM
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#8
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Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: under the kitchen sink
Posts: 386
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightwalker39
Heroin is not the way to go. Marijuana is the only good drug out there. And teenage angst?! Because of that heroin you shot up you will probably undergo it again once you reach your fourties.
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Nah, man. Ever try LSD? Feels good man.
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03-10-2011, 05:55 PM
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#9
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Join Date: Oct 2010
Posts: 3,812
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightwalker39
No one cares.
No one wants me.
I am useless,
Pathetic,
A worthless nobody.
Wandering these empty streets,
Looking for what I know,
Does not exist.
My hearts ceases to beat,
So I reach inside myself,
And pull it out.
I hold it at eye level,
And open my mouth,
Screaming,
I HATE YOU!!!!,
YOU ARE WORTHLESS!!!
I throw it against the wall,
And watch it burst,
I utter a small chuckle,
And fall to the floor,
smiling,
At the fact that,
I am finally free.
Free from the shackles,
That once bound me to the wall,
free,
At last.
I close my tired eyes,
Never to open them again.
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That's deep, man.
What do you mean "I close my eyes, Never to open them again?"
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Woke up with fifty enemies plottin' my death
All fifty seein' visions of me shot in the chest
Couldn't rest, nah nigga I was stressed
Had me creepin' 'round corners, homie sleepin' in my vest.
-Breathin, Tupac.
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03-10-2011, 06:47 PM
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#10
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
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He forgot to mention he stapled them shut in misery.
PHYSICAL PAIN FEELS THE INNER </31!!!
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03-10-2011, 08:38 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Sheffield UK.
Posts: 2,065
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This guy obviously didn't get beaten enough as a kid.
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Avoid all needle drugs - The only dope worth shooting is Richard Nixon.
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03-10-2011, 08:55 PM
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#12
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Harlem
Posts: 6,909
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightwalker39
My poetry has nothing to do with your drug usage.
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Your poetry makes me want to do drugs, you worthless cunt fart.
It's people like you that make me do the act of...
#RAGEQUITTING
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No Gods. No Kings.
Not all beliefs and ideas are equal.
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03-10-2011, 09:30 PM
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#13
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Gallifrey
Posts: 2,817
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightwalker39
No one cares.
No one wants me.
I am useless,
Pathetic,
A worthless nobody.
Wandering these empty streets,
Looking for what I know,
Does not exist.
My hearts ceases to beat,
So I reach inside myself,
And pull it out.
I hold it at eye level,
And open my mouth,
Screaming,
I HATE YOU!!!!,
YOU ARE WORTHLESS!!!
I throw it against the wall,
And watch it burst,
I utter a small chuckle,
And fall to the floor,
smiling,
At the fact that,
I am finally free.
Free from the shackles,
That once bound me to the wall,
free,
At last.
I close my tired eyes,
Never to open them again.
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03-11-2011, 03:28 AM
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#14
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,721
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You guys do realize you're being trolled by a sockpuppet whose operator has already outed him (as if it wasn't already blatantly obiouvs who was behind this before that), right?
Just checking.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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03-11-2011, 05:26 AM
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#15
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Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: under the kitchen sink
Posts: 386
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Apathy's_Child
You guys do realize you're being trolled by a sockpuppet whose operator has already outed him (as if it wasn't already blatantly obiouvs who was behind this before that), right?
Just checking.
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Goddammit. People who are this delusional are fun, though.
I wanted to believe it was real.
This is not my beautiful house.
This is not my beautiful wife.
Same as it ever was...
Same as it ever was...
Same as it ever was...
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03-11-2011, 07:30 AM
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#16
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Gallifrey
Posts: 2,817
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Apathy's_Child
You guys do realize you're being trolled by a sockpuppet whose operator has already outed him (as if it wasn't already blatantly obiouvs who was behind this before that), right?
Just checking.
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I think at this point everyone assumes that all new members are sock puppets anyway. At least I do.
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03-11-2011, 07:49 AM
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#17
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Uniontown, Kentucky
Posts: 334
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Versus
That's deep, man.
What do you mean "I close my eyes, Never to open them again?"
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Just what I said.
"I throw it against the wall,
And watch it burst,
I utter a small chuckle,
And fall to the floor,
smiling,
At the fact that,
I am finally free."
My heart has been destroyed and now I am nothing. So I am free and can die in peace.
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