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Old 09-15-2007, 01:25 AM   #1
Letuchiy Mysh
 
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Roman Rain lyrics(help plz)

Hello!
i appear on this site sometimes,may be somebody even remembers me a girl from Russia lol
anyways i like this place and will try to post more not only read.
i just wanted to ask if u could help me.I'm writing lyrics for one band called "Roman Rain" and mostly it is in English but i'm not sure about if i don't make mistakes in texts.would u plz read some of them and correct me and of course i would just love to hear ur opinions!!!!

sorry if i speak wrong its language=))
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Old 09-15-2007, 01:26 AM   #2
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My Way Differs From Yours

I would be the light blue
Frosen queen
Engraved far away
Among ices winds
You would be the ray
Of the up-coming sun
Alighting our land
Changing eternal night

My Way Differs From Yours

I would be the star
Crashing down from skies
You would be a child
Catching me in your palms
I would be the rose
Newborn and fresh
You would be the snow
Freezing my flesh

My Way Differs From Yours

It lays in other universe

My Way Differs From Yours

But anyway they have to cross

( one day they`ll cross)



Starfall

There on the edge of the Earth
I see the flaming firewall
Whisper your wish while star falls
Don’t resist and follow its call

The night gives you wings
So forget all your fears
We leave at the day (to the land)
Were the sky drops its tears?

Break free to the illusive world
And don’t drop behind a glance
Haven’t you seen in your dreams this road?
And this star fall is your last chance

And you’ll be among
The magic of dreams
And you’ll leave forever
And never taste fears
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Old 09-15-2007, 04:52 AM   #3
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Umm, I tried to make some corrections. Here you go:

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Originally Posted by Letuchiy Mysh
My Way Differs From Yours

I would be the light blue
Frozen queen
Engraved far away
Among icy winds (I'm not sure if that's what you meant)
You would be the ray
Of the upcoming sun
Lighting our land
Changing eternal night

My Way Differs From Yours

I would be the star
Crashing down from the skies
You would be a child
Catching me in your palms
I would be the rose
Newborn and fresh
You would be the snow
Freezing my flesh

My Way Differs From Yours

It lays in another (not sure that's what you meant) universe

My Way Differs From Yours

But anyway they have to cross

( one day they`ll cross)



Starfall

There on the edge of the Earth
I see the flaming firewall
Whisper your wish while a (?!) star falls
Don’t resist and follow its call

The night gives you wings
So forget all your fears
We leave at dawn (to the land)
Where the sky drops its tears

Break free to the illusive world
And don’t drop behind a glance
Haven’t you seen in your dreams this road?
And this star fall is your last chance

And you’ll be among
The magic of dreams
And you’ll leave (is it 'leave' or 'live'?) forever
And never taste fears
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