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Forum: Literature 04-08-2011, 07:01 PM

Replies: 17 Another poem (great thread title, right?) Views: 5,619 Posted By Vilentina The change has better beat but it doesn't matter... The change has better beat but it doesn't matter that much, I think.

Forum: Literature 04-08-2011, 09:52 AM

Replies: 3 The Lethal Kiss Views: 1,930 Posted By Vilentina Revised version... Last night at the... Revised version... Last night at the gorgeous ball Held by honorable Duchess Shaw Fragrant cosmetics brimming of hall Dazzled the chandelier gazing tall Young girls unveiled glittering...

Forum: Literature 04-08-2011, 07:39 AM

Replies: 17 Another poem (great thread title, right?) Views: 5,619 Posted By Vilentina I remember that before I was ten all I could do... I remember that before I was ten all I could do with my computer was drawing using the MS-preinstalled software. Rather I had fun with my friends or with myself outdoors in the sunlight. These days I...

Forum: Literature 04-07-2011, 09:37 AM

Replies: 17 Another poem (great thread title, right?) Views: 5,619 Posted By Vilentina It's so sad that we rely on the screen to get the... It's so sad that we rely on the screen to get the truth... Though high-tech helps, we should have some private, machine-free time in our life. Enjoy oneself in sunlight might be a good choice. ...

Forum: Literature 04-07-2011, 07:00 AM

Replies: 3 The Lethal Kiss Views: 1,930 Posted By Vilentina Thanks for correcting! I am often careless with... Thanks for correcting! I am often careless with singular/plural forms or present/past tenses as that's not a matter in our language. There are some words in it that's not in my vocabulary... Just...

Forum: Literature 04-07-2011, 03:43 AM

Replies: 6 Not sure what this is yet Views: 2,452 Posted By Vilentina I may need some explanation...or see other... I may need some explanation...or see other people's comment... That could do help, I think. I like the rhythem so if you were to change, keep it that way...

Forum: Literature 04-07-2011, 03:21 AM

Replies: 3 The Lethal Kiss Views: 1,930 Posted By Vilentina The Lethal Kiss It's not a new work, but I like this story (It's about an obsessed vampire that lives among mortals), so I rewrote it into English. Rhymes and rhythems are above my ability :( Please Please point...

Forum: Literature 04-06-2011, 10:43 PM

Replies: 2 First attempt, feel free to criticize Views: 1,829 Posted By Vilentina Struggling hard... is it correct? I'm not a... Struggling hard... is it correct? I'm not a native so I could not give much advice but I feel that the beats are not strong enough... And it rhymes a bit too perfect so the feel of lack of beat is...

Forum: Literature 04-06-2011, 10:39 PM

Replies: 6 Not sure what this is yet Views: 2,452 Posted By Vilentina I don't think I got the right meaning...But I... I don't think I got the right meaning...But I feel the power in it, especially in the last four lines, though I dont understand quite well the last two... Ya I agree that although seems random,...

Forum: Literature 04-06-2011, 10:28 PM

Replies: 19 a poem Views: 3,005 Posted By Vilentina It's a simple idea, i mean. I like the idea.... It's a simple idea, i mean. I like the idea. However, the expressions are not quite novel and I didn't feel much through them. I think it's a personal matter. Since I haven't read much English poems...

Forum: Literature 04-06-2011, 06:12 PM

Replies: 19 a poem Views: 3,005 Posted By Vilentina i like the idea of artist run out of talent but i... i like the idea of artist run out of talent but i don't like the expressions except the three short sentences ie. talent lost, talent wasted, talent dead.

Forum: Introductions 04-06-2011, 10:59 AM

Replies: 8 Hey there here's Vilentina Views: 1,718 Posted By Vilentina ...I thought diana krall, coldplay and bach are... ...I thought diana krall, coldplay and bach are so different... But coldplay might be close to beatles, at least. For neil gaiman, i guess it's just that I dont have the right kind of mood to read...

Forum: Introductions 04-06-2011, 09:20 AM

Replies: 6 Hello people of the Earth Views: 2,153 Posted By Vilentina I GUESS MALE!!! Although in my experience most... I GUESS MALE!!! Although in my experience most of those who like visual dark arts turn out to be female...

Forum: Introductions 04-06-2011, 08:18 AM

Replies: 8 Hey there here's Vilentina Views: 1,718 Posted By Vilentina I come to this site partially because I've been... I come to this site partially because I've been possessed in Vampires since I read Interview with the Vampire 6 years ago. Another reason is that the vampire lover's site I've been active in (in...

Forum: Introductions 04-06-2011, 07:52 AM

Replies: 8 Hey there here's Vilentina Views: 1,718 Posted By Vilentina Music... I dont have a typical genre... I guess... Music... I dont have a typical genre... I guess I like the Secret Garden, Coldplay, Beatles, DianaKrall and some Chinese singers... Whatever I feel sad or passion. In classic field, I think the...

Forum: Introductions 04-06-2011, 02:20 AM

Replies: 8 Hey there here's Vilentina Views: 1,718 Posted By Vilentina Hey there here's Vilentina Hi all. Here is Vilentina from China. Not very native English. Well my interest in Gothic started from vampires. Well well well, not the Twilight vampires, nor Vampire diaries nor True Blood, I...

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