Well, hell, I criticize literary writers, so I may as well criticize musicians too!
Spanish Massacre was great!
Warlord was great too, you had the distortion tweaked juuuuust right, until someone obviously came into your room and interrupted. LOL
Tears of isis started off great, it even had shades of Einsturzende Neubauten Industrial-Goth influence, but then at the end it sounded like you were just tuning your steel string guitar O.o
Tha Black Flame was awesome, you should keep at it, you demonstrate a flair for Goth music (in the Dead Can Dance / Industrial kind of way).
We gotta jam sometime, I play guitar too. I have a Fender Strat, and in fact, the Fender headquarters is in my home town.