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Old 10-19-2006, 05:47 PM   #1
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Amour Noir

My latest poem; hope to share with all.

Enjoy...

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Amour Noir

They call me insane
But when I gave my heart away
Thou wert the one who came to me
Thou wert the one I cared to see
No mortals could understand
The passion and will I had

I waited meekly...
In astral dreams
And pondered adrift -
Since birth, we were destined to be

And before, I, a coward with my human ways -
Left snuffed prey in a vulgar state
And now, hath cometh the day
You and I, swathed in blood draped leather capes
Await, the elders from the underworld days
Their faces, filled with amaze -
For whome was I?
A beggar for heaven's gates

Had I e'er known -
That one day we'd meet
I would've hastened myself -
Towards leper wings
But now I know -
Why the gore of hideos foes
Would to us glut in fore'er hope
Our saviour was Amour Noir!

Who else would understand?
What it meant to be denounced -
A barren rose enthralled in a mire of mud
Stepped o'er and defiled invectively
As'f illustrious as a celestial morbid slut
But I to thee opened my wings -
And thrusted my barren soul
Must've been Amour Noir!

Defile, revile, exile
My chaste to thee divine
Our lust fathomless and undefined
Such things are told defiled
But to me lover, thou be'st sweet
I'd for thee bleed
and you'd to me heed
Thou art to me as stars are to night
I am to thee as honey to bees
And from this night we tread -
No remorse for human plead
Our intercourse sodomed and sweet
This night to us in blasphemy!

Discust rejuvinates in my inner veins -
Towards this race of lesser faith
On our first meet I swore to thee our sweet revenge
For fathomless is my discraceful inner rage
And for us Darkness shalt wend
As we engage in astral r@pe
Enslave, r@pe, fornicate!

A latria born anew...
Entwined with thee dark lover -
We fullfill the darkest tears of the moon
For when I cried with despise -
Thou came'st to me like demise -
In fervent blushes, a rose in descise
I see thy eldritch beauty love -
You opened my blinded eyes
Only thy lustre dark beauty, caught my sight
'Midst this pittyful world forlorn
Must've been Amour Noir!

Perpetual destination
Morbid pleasure in matricide
Frenzy in a necrophagous state
Plundering of souls in crapulous rage
Whetted by acrid mortal screams
Nostalgia incurs us in lucid dreams
Together, we exalt and avenge God
A deicide and sukkubi, perfect as one

Our foes in throes
Our woes no more
Amour Noir!

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Old 10-20-2006, 02:00 AM   #2
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If you would like an amiable stay here, I suggest you start posting your poetry in the "Poetry Thread."

I see that your ego doesn't need anymore feeding, but I have to say, you have a great talent.

I can't wait to hear more from you.
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Old 10-20-2006, 03:16 AM   #3
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If you would like an amiable stay here, I suggest you start posting your poetry in the "Poetry Thread."

I see that your ego doesn't need anymore feeding, but I have to say, you have a great talent.

I can't wait to hear more from you.
Wend me to it.
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Old 10-20-2006, 03:22 AM   #4
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Im new and saw literature forums as a way to post my poetry; I did good to the forums to open my poetry, next time pm me lest i've done a misdeed. No need to publically denounce me; we could be nicer.
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Old 10-20-2006, 03:24 AM   #5
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Well i lurked around and found no "poetry thread". As i read this was the one suggested to post my "poetry" in. Once again i'll say, if you find a "poetry thread" please be kind enough to wend me to't as I am new and through quite enough searching i found no "poetry thread" but this.

And thank you for the comments.
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Old 10-20-2006, 03:52 AM   #6
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It's a no brainer

"Reincarnation of the Poetry Thread"

https://www.gothic.net/boards/showthread.php?t=3255
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Old 10-20-2006, 04:05 AM   #7
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I appreciate it. My brain is at many places at once; perhaps my second brain you are .
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