Because my first intro sucked - Page 2

HumanePain · 01-13-2007, 08:01 PM

It is true that stupidity crosses into middle class families too, resulting in fools who tag property that does not belong to them, property that was paid for by others, and not by the vandals. But the fact that middle class idiots do it too doesn't make it right.

And regarding the many, many tips, hints and blunt comments to you about your grammar and spelling: this site is a literary one, so yes, this is a community of people who appreciate written communication skills, and we expect the same from other members.

You are not the only one who is prodded to make a better effort in using the written word, so do not feel singled out or hated. You are merely expected to put in the same effort the rest of us have in performing the basic requirements for communicating.

But the main reason for using the best grammar and spelling possible is so that the *way* you write does not distract the reader from *what* you are trying to say. It serves you best of all to write well, because then your ideas are more likely to be accepted, or at least considered.

Humane "The Curmudgeon" Pain

BLEED REBELION!!! · 01-13-2007, 08:25 PM

Okay I will try to post only well writen things some times I just forget to read what I write. And im not justifying it by saying middle class people do it to, im just pointing out that its not just poor people or thugs or bangers.

DarkHeartedDemoness · 01-13-2007, 08:26 PM

You know what's helpful? The latest version of Firefox. It has a built-in spell check. That won't help with homonyms, but it might help just in general.

Pyre · 01-13-2007, 08:44 PM

I never stated the middle class doesn't do it. I said that it's not acceptable to them, whereas trashy America doesn't give a damn.

Delicate_Torture · 01-13-2007, 08:51 PM

So.. are we going to try for number three?

Because I do feel that I have to point out that this Introduction Thread is also somewhat sucking...

BLEED REBELION!!! · 01-13-2007, 08:53 PM

hmmm being as im not trailer trash im just a bit ghetto I wouldnt know what trashy americans think. And pretty much all parents/authority figures that I know around here dont aprove its mostly just some of the younger people that approve. And some of the graffiti is actualy very beautiful, we need some thing to brighten this shit hole up. I figure if your gonna put something on the wall it better be good.

Pyre · 01-13-2007, 08:56 PM

I didn't say trailer trash, I said trashy. The ghetto is pretty trashy. Trailer trash is for white people, the ghetto is primarily for black people. Both are trashy America.

BLEED REBELION!!! · 01-13-2007, 09:08 PM

The area is pretty bad (its been neglected for so long) but alot of the people arnt sometimes you just cant help where you live. Once your in the ghetto its hard as hell to get out. But ghetto people are not all that bad sure there are a few ass holes but I hate it when people act as if because I come from this place that I must be a this or that way.

TLZ · 01-14-2007, 03:40 AM

I actually think you registered before me... but Welcome anyway. :P

korinna5555 · 01-14-2007, 08:22 PM

AHHHHH

here is my joke of the day, come early!
its like....christmas! wonderful, because it makes me laugh. horrible, because it makes my brain rot!

im tempted to start cussing! which isnt like me.
and we dont hate you.....we just dont like you
at all

enjoy your wonderful stay
may it be full of flamings

DarkHeartedDemoness · 01-14-2007, 08:24 PM

Korinna, you're a sweetheart and I have no problem with you, but I find your criticisms of her posts a mite ironic, if not hypocritical.

Not that you don't have street cred around here.

I'm just sayin'.

Circle V · 01-14-2007, 08:29 PM

I love Xng. I just wanted to clarify that.

korinna5555 · 01-14-2007, 08:41 PM

ugh...yes, DHD, youre right
can you tell im incredibly bored?
maybe i will go to bed now...

BLEED REBELION!!! · 01-14-2007, 08:52 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhhh * runs head frst into wall.

This is makeing my head hurt.

Circle V · 01-14-2007, 08:53 PM

Your head? Think about poor us!

korinna5555 · 01-15-2007, 06:45 AM

yes, poor us!
maybe you could...put your posts in a word document? it would catch your numerous spelling and grammatical errors...

DarkHeartedDemoness · 01-15-2007, 07:19 AM

I still maintain that Firefox is a man's best friend in this particular situation. The new version spellchecks ALL OF YOUR TYPE.

Crying_Crimson_Tears · 01-15-2007, 08:30 AM

My Mac computer has spell check already on it. I just have to right click the word, and BAM!!! I have the right word.

Macs are superior to PCs.

And have I mentioned I love you guys??? You make me giggle like a little school girl. *Laughs*

DarkHeartedDemoness · 01-15-2007, 08:40 AM

That wouldn't have anything to do with you BEING a little schoolgirl, would it?

cradle · 01-15-2007, 08:42 AM

Much, much better.

Crying_Crimson_Tears · 01-15-2007, 08:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkHeartedDemoness

That wouldn't have anything to do with you BEING a little schoolgirl, would it?

Maaaayyybeeeeee.....

cradle · 01-15-2007, 08:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BLEED REBELION!!!

hmmmmmmmmm.... no vandalism isnt really "hardcore" its just something that can be really funny and entrtaining.

pyre you dont like me? Just because i cant spell or type?

No, mostly because you take no time to try and spell better.
Oh and a lot of the stuff you do screams mallgoth.

Stargazer · 01-15-2007, 09:27 AM

Both of your posts seem similar, i wonder why?... No, i have better things to dwell on. You will get flamed for this type of low quality introduction, it almost resembles the emo-tional posts that prop up.

Right anyway, take heed.

If you don't want to fester in the pit of disqust you were/are raised in, then best efforts to seek an organisation(not with a z, why? organisation is just more sensible) that helps re-grow(shroud deprived of oxygen) what could have been a pleasant and peaceful place to feel belonged to. Instead of being bored and your pathetic awe at graffiti and vandalisation, gangs and the like(get out of here if you remain the same!) why not awe at the beautiful and vibrant world of wildlfe? and make it spread throughout that emission filled lung you want dispatched. If i can think of you to detest something of that lower parenthesis as your state. You say you like art, well architecture is a must at this point (ie, join a land conservation group... etc) get the ball rolling for yourself if you so want to get out of that mess, which is mandatory! If you undertood that(which i doubt you have capacity for) it will help you and everybody else, and the world. And then when it has regenerated abit, with some trees and less concrete(which i hate in a world full of it) you will feel better and more healthier, than you actually seem.

Bye now

BLEED REBELION!!! · 01-17-2007, 06:13 PM

well I dont see much wild life or any thing here. But I have plenty of experience with nature and animals (I wasnt born here) I used to have pet chickens, dogs , cats, birds etc . I'd spend all my time in the rain forests near my house I loved it. Im really interested in nature and the like. It really bothers me that people just throw trash every where and that its so polluted. The only way I can get into nature is to leave and go some where eles. I want to fix where I live because when I get out there is still going to be more kids to fill my place and I just hate it that most of my people are liveing like this. I dont see why people feel the need to build huge citys and just screw up the earth.

Im in awe of gangs? No not really I'm not in a gang and its hard to stay out of gangs. I've been jumped because I wouldnt join BGF I've had my arm broken and ive had so many black eyes. I basicaly try stay of the radar but well its kinda hard.I have friends in gangs and thats there choice (they usualy can keep me in good standing with alot of the bangers) even if I dont agree with it.
Gangs appeal to people with nothing, they tell you that they will protect you and be your family but in the end they'll fuck you over to save their ass. If you dont join you get the shit beaten outa you if you snitch on them for beating you, they murk you.
What you've got to do is find a middle ground your not in the gang but they're cool with you. The only gangs that still have problems with me is BGF and a few goonies hate my guts I run my mouth of a little to much. But hey what are you gonna do? Alot of people think I'll turn out like my father and i've come close to it but im going to try to keep my self on a good path.

korinna5555 · 01-17-2007, 06:27 PM

darling bleed, where in maryland are you from?