Have.My.Own.Little.Blood.Party

[Blood_Party]

Have My Own Little Blood Party




When life becomes too hard for you

What do you think you should do?

You think for a little while

Then you make your mind up

On that little thing that you think won't matter to anyone





When really once you have done it

They will crush inside

Because it shows once you have done it

Your mood changes

You talk about blades and shit




Then you think about your life

It makes you too mad

To think about anyone

The people who care about you



But you don't give a fucking toss!


So you co to the nearest blade

That you can find

And put it to your wrist



Gently move the blade back and forwards

So you can feel the pain

And watch the blood dripping for your wrist


Now that this has happened



All you can think about the blade

So you do it again and again

Until you are addicted

But all your friends say stop it




But never listen to them

Hell yeah

Listen to yourself

Go for that fucking blade

Keep doing it



But it's your decision when you stop not there's


So I will always

Try to hurt myself

Before I think before the consequences

But sense is what you need to stop

To stop hurting friends and family

And best to stop hurting yourself

But it makes no difference

You will do it for a long time



Written By Soph Saych
(Blood_Party)

[Blood_Party]

Ok I'm Sorry If This Like Offends You I Like To Write Poetry When I'm Down And I Did This One When I Was Really Down

So Sorry If It Upsets Anyone =[

Blood_Party
xxx

[Tismine]

You probably wanted to post this in the "Literature" section.
Also, please put "triggering" SOMEWHERE before the poem. Because hey, guess what? I'm a recovering cutter, and this is a trigger.

[Draconysius]

Attention whore

that's all you seem to be

you're not a rebel

you're certainly not free

you all can be "different",

though you all wear chain pants

and all think "metal" has something to do with goth

this travesty is just that

a bleeding, horrible tragedy

people have real cutting problems

people who cut for...

other reasons than trying to be "goth"

you, my ignorant baby bat

would make Santa Claus himself

vomit with rage.

[Vyvian Blackthorne]

Goodness, what has happened. The poseur Holocaust...part II.

Goth Forever

[Tismine]

Draconysius, I do hope you were not referring to me.
Other than that, I agree.

[Godslayer Jillian]

Originally Posted by Tismine

post this in the "Literature" section.

Oh, gods, no!

Originally Posted by Blood_Party

I Like To Write Poetry

You like to write. There's a world of difference.

[Vyvian Blackthorne]

Good poetry. Write more. ... GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD why? I th1nk you need some writing lessons on goth poetry. Even cutting and pasting the works of Baudelaire and the person who Godslayer Jillian is a reincarnation of despite him not believeing oh well, I would have taken it but noos you had to do something without expirence and put it here, exposure eroding our eyes as you laugh sinisterly at the torture to which we behold, our flesh tearing open as your words echo through the organs placed on the upper left. The statue of the angel to which you created, placed open the the right side of the torture room. Shattered glass becomes the walls before us, as we witness your arrival, welcoming us with such a grin on your face-I behold-oh what horror-tears leaking from my virgin eyes as I witness my loved ones on this 'ol tomb be slaughtered-weaping from such unworthy young eyes.

Goth poetry, THAT IS GOTH WRITING. YOURS IS NOT. LEARN THE RULES OF THE GOTH WAYS.

Goth Forever

[amelia_ewan]

Wow . . . nice.

AE

[Vako]

I hate it when I find these sort of threads late.

[Dancing_in_rain]

Originally Posted by Tismine

Also, please put "triggering" SOMEWHERE before the poem. Because hey, guess what? I'm a recovering cutter, and this is a trigger.

I am inclined to agree with Tismine. However, don't bother posting this in the literature board. I don't think many will read it.

Bye bye.

[Godslayer Jillian]

I just read the poem again...
It's awful!

I don't care about the theme. Self-mutilation or not, it's still shit.
Blood_Party, you can't write.

[BLEED REBELION!!!]

"Rub the blade back and forth gently" ??????

Blood party why dont you just go wild, why slit your wrists gently?
Do it violently and rough and video tape it.
If you put it on youtube you might get on the news...

Just kill your self please I'm tiered of hearing this shit

[Shirani Aori]

If a death is forgiven then a life is forgotten

you shouldn't tell people to kill themselves.

[Aaroneet]

As it is, I've contemplated the miniscule value of a life. I actually thought that you were satyrizing the act of self-mutilation, and discouraging others from doing it by bringing in the "friends and family" part. In any case, if you want to bring up that strong of a topic, then disguise it through metaphor. The human is a fearful creature;he or she is only willing to take in so much of the surroundings. Perhaps the topic was slightly too big for you...

[cradle]

This had to be he worst poem I've seen in years.
Seacrest-out!

[Saddiction]

Originally Posted by Tismine

You probably wanted to post this in the "Literature" section.
Also, please put "triggering" SOMEWHERE before the poem. Because hey, guess what? I'm a recovering cutter, and this is a trigger.

If reading a completely meaningless anonymous post on the internet (of all places) triggers you to do anything, then you're a rather weak individual. Furthermore, the poem states that it takes sense to stop doing it by thinking of the people you're hurting by means of said selfish addiction. I don't care if you're a recovering cutter. I wouldn't doubt that a significant number of members on this board are recovering/ex cutters. If you consider this a trigger, you're better off hiding under a rock for the remainder of your insecure existence.

[Tismine]

It doesn't trigger me. But it is still a trigger. I don't care what the poem's intentions are. I care what it says. It honestly would not have been that hard to put "Trigger" before putting the poem. That's all I was asking. It's more hard for some people than others to stop, and reading this isn't helping.

[Underwater Ophelia]

So if this would trigger them, I guess they'd better cut their food with a fork. Or never use red food colouring, or never eat red meat.

The way the red juices just pour out over the flesh...triggers me so. I cannot fight the urge.

[Extraordinary]

I've never heard of the term "trigger" before now, and something tells me that nobody who hasn't had a wrist-cutting problem has heard of it, either.

[Saddiction]

Originally Posted by Tismine

It doesn't trigger me. But it is still a trigger. I don't care what the poem's intentions are. I care what it says. It honestly would not have been that hard to put "Trigger" before putting the poem. That's all I was asking. It's more hard for some people than others to stop, and reading this isn't helping.

Actually, I think reading it would help. Claiming it as a trigger is a clear expression of your ignorance.

[Saddiction]

Originally Posted by Underwater Ophelia

So if this would trigger them, I guess they'd better cut their food with a fork. Or never use red food colouring, or never eat red meat.

The way the red juices just pour out over the flesh...triggers me so. I cannot fight the urge.

But cutting with a fork would be more like stabbing.. would that trigger these individuals to poke themselves with pins instead? hmmm... the suspense is killing me - no pun intended.

[Tismine]

You're right, I'm sorry. I'll never, ever, ever tell anyone to please do something that I think might help, just a teensy bit, ever again. It was horribly rude of me.
How, exactly, is it an example of my ignorance? And how would it help?

[Saddiction]

I admit this poem is terribly written with bad spelling and grammar alike, but it drives a point. For the lines you obviously didn't pay much attention to, here you go:

Originally Posted by Blood_Party

When life becomes too hard for you

What do you think you should do?

On that little thing that you think won't matter to anyone

Then you think about your life

To think about anyone

The people who care about you

But you don't give a fucking toss!

So you co to the nearest blade

That you can find

And put it to your wrist

But all your friends say stop it

But never listen to them

But it's your decision when you stop not there's

So I will always

Try to hurt myself

Before I think before the consequences

But sense is what you need to stop

To stop hurting friends and family

And best to stop hurting yourself

Hopefully the chosen lines have 'triggered' people to think twice before they do it!

[Tismine]

Point taken, then.