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Old 02-27-2008, 03:28 PM   #1
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A song I wrote

it will be going on my eventual demo eventually....



I'm absurdly unhealthy
though I don't really mind too much
I smoke about a pack a day
I drink my coffee by the cup, by the cup

Sometimes I make the attempt
to pass myself off as brilliant
but in the end, it never does do
you're only my friend, though I love you

(chorus)
So let us die at a young age
from cancer, heart attacks, or mistakes
We'll live so slow, and crumble very fast
and any decision must always be rash

Driving to the music store (I'm actually thinking about changing this line, it's too obvious)
I know I was an awful bore
Your eyes were lovely, I couldn't look away
but you don't want me
and I fucked up again

So I've decided to be
completely celibate you see
Lonliness is the new "it"
and you never cared, and I don't give a shit
(chorus 2x)

Guh, I wish it was recorded to ya'll could hear how it is sung. It's sung in a very chipper and playful way.
Thoughts?
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Old 02-27-2008, 03:31 PM   #2
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If you rapped this in an Irish accent, it would be awesome.
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Old 02-27-2008, 03:45 PM   #3
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Actually, I like the lyrics. I can relate for well... the whole part.
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