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Old 08-01-2008, 08:30 AM   #26
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you write
the ink runs dry
the sea is getting bigger
... That's like the complete opposite of a haiku.
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Old 08-01-2008, 08:34 AM   #27
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This is a haiku.
Written by a Jew.
He is telling it to you.

That's by my buddy Evan in like 9th grade.
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Old 08-01-2008, 08:39 AM   #28
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He can't write Haiku either.
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Old 08-01-2008, 09:33 AM   #29
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Silly carnivorous cat of mine
I see you clawing at the grass
The mouse is behind you

Mine sucks, but I found some humor in it :P
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Old 08-01-2008, 11:02 AM   #30
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He can't write Haiku either.
Obviously that one was a joke, you foolish fool.
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Old 08-01-2008, 05:09 PM   #31
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It really does hurt.
Live Journal is the pain source.
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Old 08-01-2008, 05:26 PM   #32
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There must be a lot of emotions running through you Kontan.
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Old 08-01-2008, 05:39 PM   #33
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Oh yeah. A lot.
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Old 08-01-2008, 05:48 PM   #34
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Sorry about that. I hope things work out for you.
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Old 08-01-2008, 06:02 PM   #35
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I've no energy,
I can't drown myself in sex,
Off to the freezer!
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Old 08-01-2008, 06:05 PM   #36
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Deliciousness!
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At some point, you need to look yourself in the mirror and realize that what other people did to you does not define you as a person. You and your actions define who you are as a person. It's up to you to be a good person, in spite of all the evil you've faced. In fact, it should be because of the evil you see that it's good you do. Be the change you want in the world. Next time someone tells me that they're an asshole because they've had a bad life, I'm stabbing them in the eye with a spork.
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Old 08-03-2008, 08:29 AM   #37
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... That's like the complete opposite of a haiku.
lol you're right! Despite that there is a great meaning behind those words!
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Old 08-03-2008, 08:36 AM   #38
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... That's like the complete opposite of a haiku.
Yeah, I can't follow the 5,7,5! I leave that to the experts! But the point in haikus apart from the technical part is that you write something small with a big meaning! And yes Damned Queen there is a meaning there! Can anyone tell me what that is?
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Old 08-04-2008, 09:00 AM   #39
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Haiku don't have to be 575.

Just so you guys know...
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Old 08-04-2008, 09:16 AM   #40
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That's what I'm talking about!
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