I need some insight...

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 11:57 AM

I am working on several books, one of which is about how the afterlife of a teenager boy's father returns as a dark force killing everything he had hated in the world before.....the father is later known as the Jester of Anger, and there are two more of these jesters....I need a title....can I get some insight?

10-25-2005, 12:00 PM

I would have to read the book itself. And usually it would be your gut feeling as to what to go with. I leave anything I write untitled because if I begin with a title, I write for that, not for what I am feeling. Maybe post the book or whatever you have.

PS should this be in literature?

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:02 PM

I see what you mean, I'm constantly change titles after I finish a new paragraph...but the only reason I use titles is to keep organized....as for the book, its not anywhere near done....I have another one "Eleven Thirty-Four", that I have worked vigorously on....I can post the first chapter of that....

10-25-2005, 12:06 PM

Oh sweet Xng, you make me smile.

Trust me, keep writing, NO TITLE. It will come to you.

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:12 PM

I know it will, I'm working right now...so are you all from college? You all sound so intellectual...

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:14 PM

Sure.....but not funny..."Unfunny"...like you said...

10-25-2005, 12:17 PM

Xng, you pulled a funny like JIm Carrey can talk with his buttocks. No one really gets it but we laugh anyway. Sorry sweetie I need to say something.

I am in high school, not college.

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:18 PM

I'm a freshman in high school...what about you?

secretboy · 10-25-2005, 12:19 PM

Is this a funny ha-ha or a funny uh-oh?

Why is this in General anyways?

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:21 PM

I don't know the answer to either question...

10-25-2005, 12:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by secretboy

Why is this in General anyways?

Exactly what I was wondering..........this should be in Literature.

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:22 PM

I think it should be too, but I was having to pay attention to my Algebra 2 teacher while I did this...I know the difference...sorry....

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:24 PM

Just what I was thinking...and I'm not a newbie, I joined last month, but never posted....

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:28 PM

I know...it feels like you're yelling at me...

secretboy · 10-25-2005, 12:29 PM

I'm not a mod anymore, or I would.

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:30 PM

Yeah...hey, does anyone want to read my stories?

10-25-2005, 12:31 PM

She won't yell at you, she will flame you so badly your ass is crispy. I myself am still a newbie and I still watch my step a bit.

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:32 PM

Yeah, and you can bite....hard....very hard....I am a vampire, one I created....guess what his name is?

Lord Dagon · 10-25-2005, 12:33 PM

I'm about to leave....high school is about over...I wanted to stay longer...but my mom needs me...thanks guys, bye...

secretboy · 10-25-2005, 12:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lord Dagon

Yeah...hey, does anyone want to read my stories?

Not the brightest bulb in the lamp factory, are you?

10-25-2005, 12:34 PM

I don't want to guess.

10-25-2005, 12:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lord Dagon

Just what I was thinking...and I'm not a newbie, I joined last month, but never posted....

You're still a newb.

For if you never post then how the fuck do we know you are here? Hell, you could be on here for 15 yrs and if you never post then it's still like being a newb.

That is all.

winged_dreams · 10-25-2005, 03:10 PM

Oh! I'm a regular! ^^ Just pay more attention to the forums before posting in the wrong one!

winged_dreams · 10-25-2005, 03:22 PM

Yay!!!! And sheer wootness!

edible_eye · 10-25-2005, 03:29 PM

hey, secret - how goes the artistic pursuits?