Glee

Unimatrix 00 · 02-05-2009, 11:23 AM

Glee glee glee
Gleaming glee
Inside of you
Inside of me
Glee
Glee glee glee

The brightness within
Come unto my skin
Brighten up me
Fill me with glee

Glee glee glee
Gleaming glee
Inside of you
Inside of me
I see your ball
luminous ball
Of glee
Glee Glee Glee

(Note babies: this is a bit of a silly poem. But not all poetry must be about deep philosophical issues. Sometimes it's good to have poetry celebrating the more jovial aspects of life. x)

Duane · 02-05-2009, 11:29 AM

Stop calling everyone here babies/ladies/darlings, and shit like that.

Tam Li Hua · 02-05-2009, 11:37 AM

"Ladies" is okay. But "babies" and "darlings" is a bit annoying, unless you're going for the extreme "Victorian Goth" thing, which you obviously aren't. :P

As for the poem, it's okay, but sounds a little awkward.

menus era sota · 02-05-2009, 12:20 PM

babies? aren't you like 15? and by the way, please fuck off.

Mealla · 02-05-2009, 06:16 PM

I swear nearly all of her poems can be read in a sexual context, and then they become much more amusing.

DRM · 02-08-2009, 10:30 PM

EH, I can't say I really enjoyed it.
:/
It said glee just a couple too many times.