A Thread of Poetry ( Only Post Poetry HERE!! )

[vampyreeyes]

What was the title of the last poem Divine posted? As I have a weird feeling. Can you please tell me, if you can bother to remember?

[secretboy]

Here:

http://www.nesbitt.com/poetry/poems/poem.cfm?PoemID=98

http://www.nesbitt.com/poetry/poems/poem.cfm?PoemID=91

(thanks to Tahksis for pointing this out)

[vampyreeyes]

Ummmm.....Okay then? Ha Ha Ha. Divine really doesn't get it,at all.

[silvertounge]

Sweet and bitter just like before,
They have all but left.
Like a halo in the midnight sun,
they never did exist.
I am not crazy or mentally abused,
I, if anything, abused them.
It's all just a game, a simple game we play,
There is no end, only resurrecting over again.
Who am I to call the judged? when I infact am the one whos judged them,
These are not the ramblings of a crazy man, just what I feel I've said,
The pure truth that no one wants to know,
The quiet things that no one cares to hear,
the darkenned things that no one cares to see,
The childlike ones that no one seems to care about.
Where are we in this life we lead?
Is there anywhere we go from here?
Think about these words i speak,
And you will understand the love we need.
Hypocrities rule the world,
and peace will never reign,
think abut the world today,
and say you feel the same.
What is the point of keeping peace,
Where there is no room for it to be kept,
what is the point of ruling the world,
when theres no peace left to shed.
Think about my crazy words,
and they will soon make sense,
Think about what you love the most,
And think about yourself.
Is this really where you want to be?
Is this really who you are?
Where can you go,
Whats left to do?
Whos there for you, my friend?

[Takhisis]

Originally Posted by vampyreeyes

What was the title of the last poem Divine posted? As I have a weird feeling. Can you please tell me, if you can bother to remember?

You mean the two that were identical to the ones on the site you posted earlier in this thread? Yeah. Funny coincidence, that.

[silvertounge]

Somebody please shed some thoughts/feedback/whatever. Thanks.

[Maimy]

Post poems in the existing poetry thread.

Learn how to spell the word TONGUE.

[ice]

... Topic moved to Literature.
edit: err. I messed up the first time. Merged with "A thread of poetry"

[MrMaelstrom]

"Words of wisdom" has been merged with existing thread.


You moved it, I merged it. Hey hey, mod newbie teamwork here!

But dude, trust me: deleting feels even better! Bwahahahah!!!!

[ice]

Let me loose my composure and say "w00t".
We did it Mael. :P
Now, to do that and repeat fifty-million times.

o_O
:P

[Maimy]

MrMael, it is good to see you in this role. I, for one, feel that the DELETE option for mods/administrators has been too sparingly employed.

Not that that opinion is relevant. But: Woo!

[fallenangel666]

wow you guys are all really good, it's amazign really. but tell me what you think about this, i wrote it a few days ago:

"LOST WITHIN THE WORLD"
she's beautiful in her own mind
but the world turns away,
a life so cold and lonely
gets shorted every day.
her lost thoughts are worht a million
yet the world has closed ears,
a self-esteem as low as this
only induces her fears.
her heart strives to live with one last beat
as the world sheads its tear,
a lost life finally recognized
but now it's too late.......

alyssa virts 3/29/04

[comatoast]

Ya know. i was looking around at the bad poetry and thought to myself:"self, you can do worse than that. I know you can." so here's my shot. Hope it stinks


A shout out to Empty for being Mah inspiration for leaving my irish scottish heritage behind and going ghetto gangsta G..yo

She's smart like that
she's dark like that
when she's lying in her casket
She's goth like that
She's pale like that
She's not stale like that
When she pops you in the back of the head for being stupid
She's Goth like that
She's bad like that
She's rad like that
The way she rhymes is adept
The way you feel when she's finished with you is inapet
cause
She's cool like that
She couldn't give a shit like that
She's everybit the mistress of darkness like that
Cause she's dead like that
she's dark like that
we all know she's goth like that

[Empty_Purple_Stars]

Originally Posted by comatoast

Ya know. i was looking around at the bad poetry and thought to myself:"self, you can do worse than that. I know you can." so here's my shot. Hope it stinks


A shout out to Empty for being Mah inspiration for leaving my irish scottish heritage behind and going ghetto gangsta G..yo

She's smart like that
she's dark like that
when she's lying in her casket
She's goth like that
She's pale like that
She's not stale like that
When she pops you in the back of the head for being stupid
She's Goth like that
She's bad like that
She's rad like that
The way she rhymes is adept
The way you feel when she's finished with you is inapet
cause
She's cool like that
She couldn't give a shit like that
She's everybit the mistress of darkness like that
Cause she's dead like that
she's dark like that
we all know she's goth like that

*WERD*

I feel this sudden urge to put on:

Jincos
&
My Fat Albert baby Tee

And stand on my porch drinkin a Mickeys...

Thanks for the truly terrible tribute Coma..

I'll drink a 40 for you !

:wink:

[comatoast]

Yo
wha shizzle mah nizzle
mah peeps and me given shout outs to dose dat deserve da props.

*pushes up eye glasses and goes back to reading tolstoy*

[Maimy]

Dag, G - you good like dat!

[MrMaelstrom]

You guys don't put an end to this crap, I'm a spank me some butt LIKE DAT!

Maimy, stop encouraging the children to do this, for MAUDSAKE.

[Maimy]

Aw, honey. I was drunk again.

What's a mom to drink to sober up when she can't do caffeine? I loathe coffee?

[ohthefuckwell]

Originally Posted by MrMaelstrom

I'm a spank me some butt LIKE DAT!

*files this away with the other maelstrom visuals*







:twisted:

[Empty_Purple_Stars]

Originally Posted by MrMaelstrom

I'm a spank me some butt LIKE DAT!

If'n u keep talkin smack!!

*ducks*

Thats just wrong on soooooooooo many different levels..

I have a sudden urge to listen to Donkey Butt now...

Thanks Mael..

:shock:

[comatoast]

Let me ride that donkey donkey
let me ride that donkey!!!!
yyyyeeeeehhhaaa!!!

Dirty sanchos for everyone!!!!!!!! :twisted:

[Gypsy2222]

Moved to Observational tangents.....,

[MrMaelstrom]

Well, no one seems to appreciate my contribution to the "Exquisite corpse" thread, so I'll post a song by Marvin the Paranoid Android here.
It's not in the book, but in the radio play, or in the TV series

"Marvin"
by Marvin, the paranoid android

I'm just a robot and I know my place
A metal servant to the human race
I work my can off trying to satisfy
I know they'll disconnect me by and by

Chip on my shoulder made of silicon
My printed circuit's like a lexicon
Ten billion logic functions, maybe more
They make me pick the paper off the floor

Solitary solinoid
Terminally paranoid
Marvin

Know what makes me really mad
They clean me with a Brillo Pad
A carwash wouldn't be so bad
Life! Don't talk to me about life

I'm so depressed I could expectorate
My moving parts are in a solid state
I want to rust in peace, switch off and lie
In that great junk yard in the sky

Solitary solinoid
Terminally paranoid
Marvin

Nothing left to be enjoyed
Every diode rheumatoid
Marvin

Outer alloy
Inner void
Marvin

Happiness has been destroyed

p.s. Gypsy, Ciao is the proper spelling. "CH" in italian is read like the sound "K". Kiao for now

[Empty_Purple_Stars]

Originally Posted by MrMaelstrom

Well, no one seems to appreciate my contribution to the "Exquisite corpse" thread, so I'll post a song by Marvin the Paranoid Android here.
It's not in the book, but in the radio play, or in the TV series

"Marvin"
by Marvin, the paranoid android

Hey Poem Wrecker..
:shock:
This is the version of Marvin I have..

I'm just a robot and I know my place
A metal servant to the human race
I work my can off trying to satisfy
I know they'll disconnect me by and by
Chip on my shoulder made of silicon
My printed circuit's like a lexicon
Ten billion logic functions, maybe more
They make me pick the paper off the floor

Solitary solinoid
Terminally paranoid
Marvin

Know what makes me really mad
They clean me with a Brillo Pad
A carwash wouldn't be so bad
Life! Don't talk to me about life

I'm so depressed I could expectorate
My moving parts are in a solid state
I want to rust in peace, switch off and lie
In that great junk yard in the sky

Solitary solinoid
Terminally paranoid
Marvin

Nothing left to be enjoyed
Every diode rheumatoid
Marvin

Outer alloy
Inner void
Marvin

Happiness has been destroyed



"Night"
by Marvin, the Paranoid Android

Now the world has gone to bed,
Darkness won't engulf my head,
I can see by infra-red,
How I hate the night.
Now I lay me down to sleep,
Try to count electric sheep,
Sweet dream wishes you can keep,
How I hate the night.

[OnMyOwn]

Well i decided to put this here. Dont really think its that good but its a simple little poem.

hope you like

Just For You

i could lie awake
thinking of what to say
to try to be good
just for you

i can read all the books
just to satisfy you
but none of them would work
just for you

its so easy to satisfy a man like me
just a simple stare
just a smile would do
only from me

its so complicated for me
all the time ive used
just to get 5 minutes of you
5 minutes that i hold so close to me
only from you

these words are all strange to me
but they all make sense when im with you
every morning i wonder if ill ever speak to you
everything is just for you

you are the one who haunts my dreams
you are the only one in my dreams
it all seems imposible
you and me

i guess it is
but i dont care
all i want is to think of you
only about you

i feel so alone here
in this seat
i want to see you again
before i die
only for you

WMS