wow , thats deep *cough cough*

[Keni]

Behind fence of misconception and misunderstand...

My fear of losing my way is inhanceing...

Barbed wire for my hope, thats keeping me astray...

From my dreams and longing to see another day...

A noose for my independence... Tied, hung and left alone...

For my frredom, in which is always left unknown.

Three cheers to a freedom, that isnt not only free...

Three cheers to a life, that controls and under estemates me...

~~~~

I didnt write that by the way. No No No . When I write a poem , it may not be terrific, but

seriously

its not that horrible.
Some Myspacer sent that to me
stinking of their rigid fragility , and it just made me laugh .

Stupid NotPoets.
They tore apart their souls and good taste, and from the bitter infectious wound they bled cheap cliches without shame.

Grrrrrrr !!!!

Do you think that theyre aware that their poetry sucks?????
Dont they know that this shit is terrible ? ? ? ?
Or are they blissfully oblivious?

[requiescant_in_pace]

Why don't you post some of your magnificent poetry so that we have a basis of comparison.

Frankly; if this post buzzed through my head during intercourse, I would not be able to maintain an erection. The whole thing lacks creativity and compassion.

Boring.

[PortraitOfSanity]

I agree with the new person.

[Keni]

I never said my poetry was magnificent
because it defiinitely isnt.
But I am aware that its not as horrible as the example above, at least, though it itself may not be any good.
For comparison, I already posted a poem of mine in a seperate thread.

I do not mean to insult you or in any way degrade your worth as a person, but what is this supposed to be?
Your poetry is an attempt to grasp a fleeting thread of creativity.
Half of it is filled with grammatic impossibilities, and it is more like an incoherent flow of words than actual poetry.
This might seem harsh, but I really do have no intention of offending you.
I am simply asking you, please consider next time you write poetry that a lot of fancy words won't make poetry good, it needs more.

I am.
I could be.
But I wasn't.

It's really not enough, is it?

[sibyl vane.]

Originally Posted by Anarasha

Half of it is filled with grammatic impossibilities, and it is more like an incoherent flow of words than actual poetry.

Not always a bad thing, Anarasha. Just saying.

sibyl vane - Perhaps not, but in this case... Yeah, 'nuff said.

[sibyl vane.]

Well, find something better to criticise than intentional "grammatic impossibilities" then.

[Sir Canvas Corpsey]

Was your response to the bad poetry supposed to be your own bad poetry? Otherwise, you have a unique posting style... or you're stupid.

I never attempt poetry, I'm no good at it.

[ape descendant]

Oh come on, bad poetry is so much fun to write. I write some pretty terrible stuff, myself.

I do write something from time to time, but I do not feel the need to share something that hurts the eyes in such a degree that it's not even fun.

[Malice In Wonderland]

Hey fatty, stop trying to sound smart.

[gothicusmaximus]

Originally Posted by Malice In Wonderland

Hey fatty, stop trying to sound smart.

I like xjin more than Anarasha now, because she at least seems to have given up on trying to sound smart. In fact, I think she's given up on trying to sound not racist.

How exactly do I try to sound smart you say?
Self-criticism isn't at all smart as far as I am concerned.

[gothicusmaximus]

Originally Posted by Anarasha

How exactly do I try to sound smart you say?

Well, when you set out to critique a poem, for instance. Critiquing poetry is for intelligent people.

Originally Posted by Anarasha

Self-criticism isn't at all smart as far as I am concerned.

Actually, it is, when one is you.

So, because my english gammar or verbal skills may not be perfect, that instantly degrades my intelligence to the point where it is insignificant?
If that is the view on things one need in order to be intelligent, I do not want to be intelligent at all. I am quite happy being a dumb fuck then.
You can keep this pretentious, stuck-up intelligence.

[gothicusmaximus]

Originally Posted by Anarasha

So, because my english gammar or verbal skills may not be perfect, that instantly degrades my intelligence to the point where it is insignificant?

No, you piteously impaired jackass, I didn't say that. While your English is embarrassing, you've a sufficient grasp of the language that, if you had intelligent thoughts, you'd be able to articulate them. However, in over a thousand posts, you haven't mustered the intellect to say a single insightful, interesting, or even almost clever thing.

So, if I do not feel the need to express intelligence on here, it automatically means that I could not if I wanted to?
I don't come on here to share intelligent thoughts or philosophy with any of you.
I come here for some casual conversations, the forum games, some flaming ever so often, mostly to adapt new words in my vocabulary and to improve my spelling and to load off.
I feel no appearent need whatsoever to share my deeper thoughts on here, especially not with you of all people.
Your proclaimed intelligence is simply a matter of you being able to shit on people with a creative and vast choice of words. You haven't as far as I have EVER seen posted anything remotely relevant to anything that did not involve you flaming someone, patting someone on the back for flaming someone or otherwise be a nasty person.
Wherein does YOUR intelligence lie?
Until you prove me otherwise, I will claim you to be a charletan whose only quality is a vast vocabulary and nothing else.

[gothicusmaximus]

Originally Posted by Anarasha

So, if I do not feel the need to express intelligence on here, it automatically means that I could not if I wanted to?

Intelligent people don't 'feel the need to express intelligence'. Intelligence isn't a D&D power, you don't burn mana to activate it. Intelligent people are perceptibly intelligent.

I come here for some casual conversations

Which intelligent people have about intelligent things.

the forum games

Which intelligent people don't play.

some flaming ever so often

At which you're awful, because you have no wit.

mostly to adapt new words in my vocabulary and to improve my spelling and to load off.

That doesn't require posting.

Your proclaimed intelligence is simply a matter of you being able to shit on people with a creative and vast choice of words. You haven't as far as I have EVER seen posted anything remotely relevant to anything that did not involve you flaming someone, patting someone on the back for flaming someone or otherwise be a nasty person.

I've posted about economics, social justice, gender politics, Latin grammar, and Jewish identity on this forum. When I am 'nasty' to someone, it's generally because that person's idiocy offends my intelligence, and I exercise my intelligence in artfully informing them of how wrong they are.

Until you prove me otherwise, I will claim you to be a charletan whose only quality is a vast vocabulary and nothing else.

You don't really think that. If you do, you really are denser than I ever dreamed.

Originally Posted by gothicusmaximus

Intelligent people don't 'feel the need to express intelligence'. Intelligence isn't a D&D power, you don't burn mana to activate it. Intelligent people are perceptibly intelligent.

And if I am not exceedingly intelligent compared to you, then what?

Which intelligent people have about intelligent things.

Not always.

Which intelligent people don't play.

And why is that?

At which you're awful, because you have no wit.

I did not say that I wished to flame anyone else. I enjoy BEING flamed in creative ways because they usually make me chuckle.

That doesn't require posting.

No, but it helps.

I've posted about economics, social justice, gender politics, Latin grammar, and Jewish identity on this forum. When I am 'nasty' to someone, it's generally because that person's idiocy offends my intelligence, and I exercise my intelligence in artfully informing them of how wrong they are.

If that is true, then perhaps you are intelligent. That does not make you a better person.

You don't really think that. If you do, you really are denser than I ever dreamed.

You might claim me to be dense, but as far as human rights go, I am allowed to have my oppinion about people regardless.

[prophecyofdoom]

Keni, why post something that you didn't write and you don't much like? Feel better about yourself if you could get everyone to flame someone else?? I personally approve of poetry and many other forms of self expression, even if they are considered bad, becuase it is another person trying to communicate something about how they are feeling and I happen to like that sort of thing. Trying to get a bunch of people to gang up on some unsuspecting person, I happen to really not like that sort of thing.

[gothicusmaximus]

Originally Posted by Anarasha

And if I am not exceedingly intelligent compared to you, then what?

The problem isn't that you aren't smart compared to me. Very, very few people are, so I can't fault a guy for that alone. The problem is that you're unequivocally stupid.

Not always.

But often.

And why is that?

Why do you think? Are you so far removed from even the faintest glimmer of intellect that you can't imagine why an intelligent person wouldn't want to waste time assigning arbitrary scores to forum avatars or cataloging what he ate on a given day?

I did not say that I wished to flame anyone else. I enjoy BEING flamed in creative ways because they usually make me chuckle.

Well, whatever.

No, but it helps.

You know, I don't even know why the hell I implicity condoned seeking to improve your English by observing this forum in the first place. This forum is a goddamn terrible place to learn English; 80% of the people here have no aptitude for it whatsoever. There are textbooks, you know.

If that is true, then perhaps you are intelligent.

That's not really paramount among evidence of my intelligence, but okay.

That does not make you a better person.

Uh, sure.

You might claim me to be dense, but as far as human rights go, I am allowed to have my oppinion about people regardless.

And you have human rights, but that doesn't make you any less fucking dense.

Originally Posted by gothicusmaximus

The prob...Cut down for size...nse.

For this one time only, I will actually try to level with you - not that I for a second believe that you would care.
That I come here to improve my english and for the games are a small part of the reason.
In truth I come here because I am lonely, and this brings me closer to social interaction with other people than I can achieve in real life.
The reason that I seem dense on here is probably because I have nothing significant to say to anything posted here seeing as very little of it actually interrests me.
Yet I feel a need to enact in posting on here because I am lonely.
So basically, I am a sad and lonely geek who come here in order to try and replace the lacking social interactions of real life because on top of everything I have a horrible self-esteem and therefore am too shy to seek out these things in real life instead.
Now I am not dense enough to seek any sort of confirmation on here, but drawing any kind of attention to myself provides me with a minor satisfaction of my social needs.
On top of all of this, I have no lovelife, only a few friends and the only things I ever do are play games and practice music.
Now you have all the facts about me. I have no idea why I decided to post them for public view as it will probably be used to flame me again later, but then again, I have nothing to hide.
Now you may judge me, and I shall refrain from fighting you on your oppinions as whatever you may or may not think of me from now on will probably be justified.
I feel no further need to continue a flamewar with you any further though, so this will be the last defensive response to flames from you that I will post.

[JCC]

Bad move, Anarasha. When someone is making fun of you, don't respond with "Yeah, I'm a lonely fatass."