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Old 07-31-2010, 12:25 AM   #1
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Nobody
I am nobody
I am cold and unfeeling
Inside is a deep, dull, cold pain that is constantly throbbing
I am unloved
I am missed by no one
I do not exist.
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Old 08-01-2010, 07:54 AM   #2
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Is this serious?
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Old 08-01-2010, 10:21 AM   #3
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Is this serious?
Yes.
I realize its horribly cliche but I wrote it actually feeling this way. its very real.
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Old 08-01-2010, 10:46 AM   #4
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Writing this while actually feeling that way doesn't make this good or worthwhile.

Seriously, if you actually care about poetry, try harder than this.
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Old 08-03-2010, 11:40 AM   #5
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Boo hoo boo hoo.

Give it up.
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Old 08-05-2010, 04:52 PM   #6
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I really liked her poem!
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Old 08-05-2010, 07:37 PM   #7
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I really liked her poem!
Keats who?
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Old 08-06-2010, 12:00 AM   #8
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I really liked her poem!
Thank you!
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Old 08-07-2010, 04:55 PM   #9
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You're welcome!
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