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Old 06-04-2008, 07:25 AM   #1
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my first published article !!
i just got my first article published this week (woot),in the webzine mookychick (which is awsome)

i just wanted to get a little feedback from you guys about the article so i can improve my journalism/writing skills, so heres the link:

http://www.mookychick.co.uk/body/how..._pale_skin.php

hope you like it
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Old 06-05-2008, 11:22 AM   #2
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Great article! I am already very pale so I would not try any of the things you recomend. But if I was dark I would definately try the lemon juice thing.
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Old 06-05-2008, 12:08 PM   #3
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Congratz!!!

It is a good article. I wouldn't have known about some of the things that you talked about. If I get a tan then I will definately try that out. lol.
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Old 06-05-2008, 05:10 PM   #4
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Congratulations! I know that is an absolutely wonderful feeling!
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