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Old 08-18-2008, 12:04 PM   #1
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New Song Lyrics: Diamonds In Your Skin

Verse 1:

If you look back at your past
and realize
It wasn't made for you
Take all those sad memories
And fetid lies
Burn it all for you
And similar with the ash
Diamonds are made
Sparkling for you
Oh you could make something new
Make something you

Chorus:

The past is irrelevant
Like the diamonds in your skin
You can step to the future
And start all over again
There's no reason to feel down
When the past is diamonds in your skin
You can be a part of the future
Like some sparkling laser beam man

Verse 2:

If you look to your future
And realize
It's all there for you
You can take the hopes you have
To steel yourself
And start something new
Take the first step at lightspeed
And close your eyes
New names wait for you
Oh you could make something new
Make something you
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Old 08-18-2008, 03:47 PM   #2
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I like this one.
It's...encouraging.
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Old 08-18-2008, 04:22 PM   #3
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I love the idea of diamond skin.
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Old 08-18-2008, 06:24 PM   #4
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Interesting idea. Were you keeping LifeGem in mind while writing this? It is a fantastic process they've developed, extracting the carbon from ash and creating synthesized diamond. One human body can create over a hundred diamonds.

We are each a diamond mine in disguise.
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Old 08-19-2008, 03:33 AM   #5
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Yes I was. Those who know of this will find that the past, though it's in our memories are more artificial than the future. Hence the diamonds in your skin being irrelevant. They can't possibly be as real as the now and the future, but they can sure make you sparkle.
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Old 08-19-2008, 11:35 AM   #6
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This is very interesting ... you must have music to go with it, yes?
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Old 08-19-2008, 04:31 PM   #7
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You won me over when you just mentioned the word diamond..
But I really like it, very creative. =]
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Old 08-19-2008, 05:43 PM   #8
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Well... I'm working on the music right now. In fact, our dearest Draconisys offered to help me work out a melody. Should be good I think.
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Old 08-19-2008, 08:24 PM   #9
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Yes I was. Those who know of this will find that the past, though it's in our memories are more artificial than the future. Hence the diamonds in your skin being irrelevant. They can't possibly be as real as the now and the future, but they can sure make you sparkle.
I am impressed.
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Old 08-20-2008, 03:20 PM   #10
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I'm glad you like it.
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Old 08-20-2008, 05:15 PM   #11
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Well... I'm working on the music right now. In fact, our dearest Draconisys offered to help me work out a melody. Should be good I think.
What sound do you think you will go for..?

I really like these lyrics, though I find it quite a bit cheery.
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