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01-08-2009, 02:43 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
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Vampyric Luv
I seek my Gawfick luv,
She looks like a dove,
I ascend to the highest peak,
Nay! I have not a beak.
I wonder across the foundations of the earth,
Finding out where my luv makes berth,
I find nothing but bare ash,
And a packet of Oreos.
Just as I begin to forsake hope,
I realise my luv is not the Pope,
I gaze up at the sky and find the moon,
I realise that it is the Woman on the Moon I'll be fucking soon.
I call out to her,
"O Lady of the cheesy sphere! Come down to your true luv!",
cont...
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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01-08-2009, 02:49 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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The moon woman is a typical woman,
She brings the moon with her,
The black sea is awakened,
I am forsakened!
I am dragged up to the shore,
I call the woman a whore,
And become a homo sexual instead,
And Nay! I have not a big head!
FIN
Genius!
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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01-08-2009, 04:19 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: In Your Pants, PA.
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Originally Posted by Necrophagist
I seek my Gawfick luv,
She looks like a dove,
I ascend to the highest peak,
Nay! I have not a beak.
I wonder across the foundations of the earth,
Finding out where my luv makes berth,
I find nothing but bare ash,
And a packet of Oreos.
Just as I begin to forsake hope,
I realise my luv is not the Pope,
I gaze up at the sky and find the moon,
I realise that it is the Woman on the Moon I'll be fucking soon.
I call out to her,
"O Lady of the cheesy sphere! Come down to your true luv!",
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This is so hardcore, man.
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01-09-2009, 09:43 AM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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It's a work of art!
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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01-09-2009, 01:23 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Hell
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Originally Posted by badteccy
This is so hardcore, man.
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Thats because Necrophagist is soooo goffick-black-metal Hardxcore!
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01-09-2009, 02:17 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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That was lamer than hobos thinking they can get money by holding shopdoors open for customers.
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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02-09-2009, 12:25 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 182
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would be wrong of me to say it made me laugh?
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02-11-2009, 03:25 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: prosper
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ive locked my heart
buried in the darkest side
of the deepest hole
no emotion no nothing
just a walking corpse
turning to roots
i gave u the key
the key tht saved me
the key tht killed me
the key tht shut the doors to fate
with ur hand we walked dead lovers lane
carried roses to our graves
drank wine we stole
and died with our heart conjoined
as we wlked int twilight
our sins were burned
we werew no longer demons
we what we had eternal love
but it was just a perfect ending
what more could bappen
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02-11-2009, 04:05 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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Originally Posted by jigsaw
ive locked my heart
buried in the darkest side
of the deepest hole
no emotion no nothing
just a walking corpse
turning to roots
i gave u the key
the key tht saved me
the key tht killed me
the key tht shut the doors to fate
with ur hand we walked dead lovers lane
carried roses to our graves
drank wine we stole
and died with our heart conjoined
as we wlked int twilight
our sins were burned
we werew no longer demons
we what we had eternal love
but it was just a perfect ending
what more could bappen
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CONFORMIST!
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02-11-2009, 05:08 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: prosper
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um thnx dood
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02-11-2009, 05:09 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: prosper
Posts: 74
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damn my grammer
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02-11-2009, 06:49 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Australia
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Originally Posted by jigsaw
ive locked my heart
buried in the darkest side
of the deepest hole
no emotion no nothing
just a walking corpse
turning to roots
i gave u the key
the key tht saved me
the key tht killed me
the key tht shut the doors to fate
with ur hand we walked dead lovers lane
carried roses to our graves
drank wine we stole
and died with our heart conjoined
as we wlked int twilight
our sins were burned
we werew no longer demons
we what we had eternal love
but it was just a perfect ending
what more could bappen
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Is this supposed to be a joke?
It seems like you tried :/
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02-11-2009, 11:26 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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02-12-2009, 08:25 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Heaven and Earth
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"Follow your bliss..."
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02-12-2009, 10:01 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: prosper
Posts: 74
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no i rly just put on the line its not good huh
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02-12-2009, 10:20 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: prosper
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In this darkness
no one can see
there is no light
and there is no joy
you shall die with one footstep
my sweet sweet sillhoute
your body so fragile
your mind so weak
your leg's are shaking
along with your hand's
you soon start sweating
and want to scream out
but no one that care's
will bale you out
you know someone's watching
you know someone want's you
so keep walking foward
and don't turn back
this person that watche's
is hell it self
and you have no clue
that you shall die
no one can hear your scream's anymore
no one will care anymore
and I wil be the only one who hear's
I'm sorry my love
your blood so sweet
your strugling so desirble
your scream's so lustful
my love tonight's the night you find the truth
that we exist
but you found out a little to late goodbye
and sleep tight
is this better?
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02-12-2009, 12:51 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 225
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When my teacher told me I had no sense of meter
I rose out of my chair to beat her.
Free from the prison of meter and rhyme,
I am now writing poetry while doing time.
Although I care so much for my talent and pride,
I think Bubba wants to make me his bride.
I wish I knew where I could of sent my bad poetry sooner
Since Bubba is a very bad spooner.
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02-12-2009, 12:59 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 265
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That actually wasn't bad. I almost smiled.
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02-12-2009, 01:35 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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MY TURN!
Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again.
Wait... that's a song.
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02-12-2009, 01:40 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Heaven and Earth
Posts: 2,606
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There was an old Goth
Who lived in a shoe
She was so gloomy
She didn't know what to do.
She painted her door black
And her walls too.
She had some slime
And some goo
And made a giant ghost
That would always say "BOO!!!"
Heh. That's about as goth as my "poetry" gets. XD XD XD
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02-12-2009, 02:49 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Your poem was pretty entertaining, Tam Li Hua. Maybe you should post more (hint, hint).
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02-13-2009, 08:27 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Heaven and Earth
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Heh heh. I might, if the mood strikes me. XD
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08-03-2009, 10:20 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Nowhere
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I would say it did make me laugh.
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08-15-2009, 05:52 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: NY, Sleep...
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Necrophagist
I seek my Gawfick luv,
She looks like a dove,
I ascend to the highest peak,
Nay! I have not a beak.
I wonder across the foundations of the earth,
Finding out where my luv makes berth,
I find nothing but bare ash,
And a packet of Oreos.
Just as I begin to forsake hope,
I realise my luv is not the Pope,
I gaze up at the sky and find the moon,
I realise that it is the Woman on the Moon I'll be fucking soon.
I call out to her,
"O Lady of the cheesy sphere! Come down to your true luv!",
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I've got to say you really jumped in my head when you mentioned oreas... lol I was like wth I want some.
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