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Old 07-17-2009, 10:16 PM   #1
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Forever, Friends-short story(piece)

“Lee, I’m sorry I put worms in your soup.”
“I’m sorry I put super glue in your hair…”
“Instead of being enemies lets be friends OK? Friends forever.”
“…Alright, friends forever.”

Because we were the top two students in our school, An and I had always butted heads for number one. In the end we decided pulling pranks on each other wasn’t worth the humiliation we put ourselves through. And we promised, never to fight again. ...Who would want to kill An?

Part of a short story, even though it's short, it is still kinda long to post in a forum. Not a particularly outstanding story, but it is special, because I never finish a story. I only post a small piece because I'm very..uh, timid when it comes to showing my creations. So if you care and if you're lucky maybe more will come.
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Old 07-26-2009, 04:15 AM   #2
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“Lee, I’m sorry I put worms in your soup.”
“I’m sorry I put super glue in your hair…”
“Instead of being enemies lets be friends OK? Friends forever.”
“…Alright, friends forever.”

Because we were the top two students in our school, An and I had always butted heads for number one. In the end we decided pulling pranks on each other wasn’t worth the humiliation we put ourselves through. And we promised, never to fight again. ...Who would want to kill An?

Part of a short story, even though it's short, it is still kinda long to post in a forum. Not a particularly outstanding story, but it is special, because I never finish a story. I only post a small piece because I'm very..uh, timid when it comes to showing my creations. So if you care and if you're lucky maybe more will come.
Oh my god, I'm amazed. This is actually so bad I can't think of a snappy remark for it. It's like something so ugly you just want to take pity on it. Want some advice regarding writing?


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