A call of silence
through grey fallen life.
A soul mate
not yet met.
Yet somehow hope lights melancholic days.
And the grey for a moment, slowly fades away.
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Out of all the bits of prose I've written, this one always stands out as my most sincere.
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brava
sincere indeed! it says much, your tone is gorgeous. do you intend to expound on it, or is that just as you intend to keep it? Either way, very nicely written. I think you could go far with it if you kept going.
Nope, I think that's all that needs to be said. I actually recorded it as a bit of a Doom Metal song for my Endtime project, you can hear it at Myspace.com/Theendtime
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ok!
Sounds good! I will definately check it out! thanx! oh, and btw, your very welcome. you really did a good job, so really, thank-you for sharing it! I look forward to sieing more of your works!
