Ghost's Soul (my soul)

[Vyvian Blackthorne]

Graving, I lay here-
On top of tomb to which my lover once lay-
The ghosts’ enchanting spirits haunting my sorrowful body-
Her face appearing in front of my very eyes, they close in vein

For life, fading away as the blood runs down my cross-burned temples
Odors of the damned
Reason draining like the sewers to which my tears flooded
Even ghost laughs cruelly darkness drowsing into the pupils into eyes-
Vampirism she advocates, sucking the life as she enters my soul it shuts itself in the gates
Each gate-symbolizing my crushes blood and bones
Reluctantly they rust, and like my graving body, they decay…

[Shyantra]

Vyv, I liked how you incorporated the words "Goth Forever" as the first leter in each line.

[Godslayer Jillian]

I wouldn't have bolded the letters.
Most people would have missed them, but as soon as someone noticed, people would have been embarrassed and pressured to pay closer attention to small hints of ergodic literature.

[KontanKarite]

I'm with Jillian. If you want to be cryptic and secret, don't bold your stuff.

Other than that, nice work on the idea.

[Vyvian Blackthorne]

Ghoot...I do like goth forever =
Thanks guys, but for the record I must say I like the occasional amount of effort I'd like to do that to make my work seem a bit more complex to read. I never honestly (BOW DOWN BEFORE I) do that (LICK THE COCK OF INJUSTICE AND PRAY) because I can't say I enjoy (TOWARD ME, YOU ARE MY TOY WITH LUNGS) putting secret cryptic or sublimial (CUT THE FLESH OF THE VIRGIN'S BODY AND DRIP IT BEFORE ME) messages.

[Kitten of the Catacomb]

I especially adore the VER lines.

[Aaroneet]

I actually think that you deserve more credit for this.