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| Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books. |
02-29-2008, 11:11 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
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Oh Noes
Run away, away from the monsters, they come,
hunting me an animal I really am in my dreams.
OW OW! They've brought with them the screaming wolves
to bring further worries to my mind, FLEE, I MUST, FLEE!
To the withered tree I run, there I may just have a chance,
the demon monkeys away, feasting upon skellington Jack's skull.
At last, I've escaped those who gave chase, and now can rest,
to hell with all of this, I'd rather suffer a Kenny G concert,
then to have this happen again.
OH FUN FUN FUN!!! The tree has been set ablaze, what am I going to do?!
I'm stuck, with no where to go, no one to help me, well, I've had a good run,
and atleast I will no longer have to put up with the screeching sound of WHEE
GOOD BYE, AND GOOD RIDDIANCE, FOR I AM FREE AS A WINGED TACO!
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02-29-2008, 11:17 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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We should write a movie.
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02-29-2008, 11:34 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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02-29-2008, 11:44 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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I'm just trying to find my niche.
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02-29-2008, 11:47 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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You left it in my kitchen yesterday.
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02-29-2008, 12:15 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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It can't be that bad, this poem, can it?
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02-29-2008, 12:41 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Well... I guess I could always write another poem... see how that turns out.
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02-29-2008, 12:45 PM
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I say stick with this sort of stuff. There's too many serious poems, not enough Dr. Seuss.
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02-29-2008, 01:42 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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I guess, I fail at anything serious... the best I could do is write poems that kindergarten teachers would read their students before nap time...
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02-29-2008, 01:44 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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What the fuck is wrong with that? I like those types of poems. I hate all the pretentious shit that gets written in this section. This one shines out as a wee little beacon of "Fuck You" light in a mountain of castrated horse cocks!
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02-29-2008, 01:56 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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I don't know, though... doesn't matter... because I think I just found my niche.
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02-29-2008, 02:55 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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There's more than enough Dr Seuss, Dr Seuss was pretty meh, his work didn't have much to think about, it was more "UNEXPECTED COMEDIC TWIST X20 WITH NO STORY!".
Look at some of the greatest satirist writers of all time.
If you're a good writer of satire, you're awesome.
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02-29-2008, 02:59 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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Dr. Seuss pwned. Old Hat New Hat is literary genius!
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03-01-2008, 08:16 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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I actually think this is a vast improvement on your love poem. You still need a lot of work if you want to get really good, but at least you're figuring that unless you totally rule like only about 3 poets ever have, humor is a better approach than earnest cliche.
Keep writing, dude.
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Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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