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09-02-2008, 09:31 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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random poems
Blood in snow
Is the way to go
But black blood....
Steals the show
Think me weird if you wish,
But you haven't met my friend Paul...
THE TALKING FISH!
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09-02-2008, 11:31 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: griffin,ga
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Thats pretty good.
I came up with this is biology class a couple weeks ago.Keep in mind that I'm am by no means a writer.
The first night I saw you I knew I wanted to taste your blood,feel your heart beat in my hands,to here you cry for your life.I saw you with him holding his hand.You think your life is perfect.It was untill you met me.I am the devil here to take your soul and now I have killed two
One touch I'll drag you to hell
One kiss I'll rip out your heart
One look you will never forget the night I took your life
I come out in the dark to find new taste. I see you here in the city of evil.You see me watching you from the dark shadows.I saw you fucking him enraging me more.you can't fool me with those eyes'with those lies'here come the flys to pick you apart.I watch you leave.I followed you.I set a trap and nowyour life is in my hands.I picked you apart peice by peice.I killed you for the pleasure,for the blood,for your heart.
One touch I'll drag you to hell
One kiss I'll rip out your heart
One look you will never forget the night I took your life
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09-02-2008, 01:15 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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So, Antichrist, are you a frustrated virgin or what?
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09-02-2008, 03:16 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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I like it......it reads well and reminds me of well of lust
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09-02-2008, 03:57 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Bergamo - Italy
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Quote:
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
Blood in snow
Is the way to go
But black blood....
Steals the show
Think me weird if you wish,
But you haven't met my friend Paul...
THE TALKING FISH!
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:o i like that!
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09-02-2008, 03:58 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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that was my positive random peak of the day
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09-02-2008, 04:00 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Bergamo - Italy
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hehe i think you should write more! it reminds me of Tim Burton for some reason 
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09-02-2008, 04:02 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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I like Tim Burton
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09-02-2008, 04:03 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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Giving it thought,
I have no reason to plot.
I shall speak my mind,
Maybe I'll find.....
Crap, i forgot
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09-02-2008, 04:05 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Bergamo - Italy
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
Giving it thought,
I have no reason to plot.
I shall speak my mind,
Maybe I'll find.....
Crap, i forgot
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xD lovely!
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09-02-2008, 04:08 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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thought so
flower in the open,
Open to What?
all along hopein
Hopeing for what?
no longer mopein
Why so blue?
Finally opened, bloomed, its you
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09-02-2008, 04:12 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Bergamo - Italy
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sweet
You should write a mini book containing your works!
I would definetly get a copy.
I think art really helps people in many ways, when i get angry i draw many things that some peopel find rather scary but i feel really good after that, like my feelings went trough my arm to the paper leaving peace in my heart.
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09-02-2008, 04:16 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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I'm writing a book in itself and poetry volumes already so far my boyfriend's mom loves me by just reading them
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09-02-2008, 04:47 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Netherlands
Posts: 4,036
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I loathe your existance
Your pitiful excuses have expired
How funny that you now cry
No apologies, no resistance
The thought of you just makes me tired
And now you must die
^ that was a crappy try by me to get everything out of my system
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"I've an idea. Why don't we play a little game. Let's pretend that we're human beings, and that we're actually alive. Just for a while. What do you say? Let's pretend we're human. Oh, brother, it's such a long time since I was with anyone who got enthusiastic about anything."
― Jack Osborne
add me on
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09-04-2008, 12:31 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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I don't think that...i love it
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09-04-2008, 12:48 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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Do you know what i always see?
I only see what i want you to do to me...
Will you ever?
My guess is never...
How you bite and tease
You must find yourself clever
Yet i could bring you to your knees
But that's if we ever........
Oh screw it.....stay a bloody virgin
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09-04-2008, 12:50 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Bergamo - Italy
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lal Twisted! xD that was really cool!
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09-04-2008, 12:50 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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(whenever I'm stressed, anxious or in a hurry I start reciting limericks n my head, why is that?)
"White roses turn red when soaked in my life juice.
But for cheaper than a dozen, I can buy a nice noose.
I lay crying from my wrist,
Waiting for my life to desist.
Swift death these rose thorns don’t produce."
"There was an Old Person whose habits,
Induced him to feed upon rabbits;
When he'd eaten eighteen,
He turned perfectly green,
Upon which he relinquished those habits."
"There was a Young Lady whose chin,
Resembled the point of a pin;
So she had it made sharp,
And purchased a harp,
And played several tunes with her chin."
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09-04-2008, 12:52 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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I don't know but i can guess.....its a way of calming yourself maybe not intentionally but it happens
I like it though
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09-04-2008, 12:58 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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Temptation to gaze but not allowed
I would sit up but that's far too proud.
You tempt me to kneel
You help me to heal.
You helped me through it and showed me how
But still i will always bow.....
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09-04-2008, 01:00 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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Thank you , hehe, I'm, pleased you didn't say it's because you are a NUT-CASE!
I bet you could write some corker limericks!
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09-04-2008, 01:01 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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so weird....... you replied with a limerick just as I was asking!!
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09-04-2008, 01:02 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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ain't i fun
*giggles*
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09-04-2008, 01:05 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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what inspires your creativity to write? I'm only asking cos I'm a sculptor but I'm having a serious creative block and it's scaring me. I haven't made any decent work for 3 years! has this happened to you??
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09-04-2008, 01:07 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Netherlands
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I leave this room, so it'll burn
Flames fight flames
Leading to a massacre
Life is a game, i play, you learn
Your lives, for me, only names
And i am the conqueror
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Here's another one, please, if you don't like it go easy on me
You said i was weak
You spoke right
Words fade out
No longer weak, not tonight
As the bloody rain pours down
The black rainbow shines
No sun, just the crying moon
Dark shades open my mind
This night may become your last
Abomination is my army
Things you've done in the past
Revenge is my only remedy
A gift from God, an angel i come
Many people were fooled, so were you
When i come i shall be undone
'cuz angels take lives too
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"I've an idea. Why don't we play a little game. Let's pretend that we're human beings, and that we're actually alive. Just for a while. What do you say? Let's pretend we're human. Oh, brother, it's such a long time since I was with anyone who got enthusiastic about anything."
― Jack Osborne
add me on
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