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09-04-2008, 01:10 PM
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#26
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My messed up head inspires me.....yes i have had a block up to four years
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09-04-2008, 01:10 PM
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#27
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 132
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wowowowoowowowow!
powerful words and imagery!!
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09-04-2008, 01:12 PM
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#28
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 132
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(thanks for telling me that Twisted, I feel reassured that it wont last forever)
(sorry for the digression from topic)
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09-04-2008, 01:15 PM
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#29
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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I know right
Messing with you makes me kness weak,
Every bite you give makes depression bleak.
But as i grow immune to your tease,
I still can't help but get weak in the knees
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09-04-2008, 01:23 PM
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#30
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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I wish it could,
I wish you would.
Please kiss me goodnoght.
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I think i will,
Please hold still.
We are quite in sight.
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Please hold me,
Can't you see?
I want it done right.
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Goodnight
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09-04-2008, 01:33 PM
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#31
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Netherlands
Posts: 4,036
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^ that is something sweet, it kinda reminds me of my boyfriend
Thank you all for the support 
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"I've an idea. Why don't we play a little game. Let's pretend that we're human beings, and that we're actually alive. Just for a while. What do you say? Let's pretend we're human. Oh, brother, it's such a long time since I was with anyone who got enthusiastic about anything."
― Jack Osborne
add me on
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09-04-2008, 01:34 PM
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#32
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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Wanting it bad,
You once i had
Its seems you are fadeing,
Or what i want from you is forbadeing.
But you cringe at the thought of hurting me
but pain for me is the key
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09-04-2008, 01:35 PM
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#33
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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It was mainly what went down with my boyfriend and i a couple weeks ago....i'm glad i am being supporting
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09-04-2008, 01:49 PM
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#34
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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Gaining the urge to feel this
Your hands on me to feel your kiss
You really are a dream
I am more than i may seem
To make up for all that's lost
Makes me not care for the cost
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09-04-2008, 01:54 PM
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#35
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Netherlands
Posts: 4,036
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^ Fuck you (in a good way tho)
Hehe
When my boyfriend comes online i'll show this to him 
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"I've an idea. Why don't we play a little game. Let's pretend that we're human beings, and that we're actually alive. Just for a while. What do you say? Let's pretend we're human. Oh, brother, it's such a long time since I was with anyone who got enthusiastic about anything."
― Jack Osborne
add me on
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09-04-2008, 01:56 PM
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#36
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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thank you of course it makes this fucking urge worse.....tell me what he thinks
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09-04-2008, 02:00 PM
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#37
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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I rub my thumbs down your back
You thrust once more, eyes go black
I moan aloud
You seem quite proud
then thuaq!
You like that?
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09-04-2008, 08:31 PM
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#38
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: griffin,ga
Posts: 207
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Originally Posted by gothicusmaximus
So, Antichrist, are you a frustrated virgin or what?
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No.When I wrote that I was pissed off and think of my x that cheated on me.
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09-13-2008, 11:14 AM
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#39
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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so do i! well yeah
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09-13-2008, 11:19 AM
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#40
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,678
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How is it random to write shitty poetry and put something intentionally 'quirky' at the end of it?
Also, why is everyone joining in this game of bad literature soggy biscuit?
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09-13-2008, 11:36 AM
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#41
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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Yeow ow ow ow ow!
Wow wow wow wow wow!
Whoo hoo hoo hoo hoo!
Screamin' like a fucking zoo!
AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!
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09-13-2008, 02:56 PM
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#42
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: griffin,ga
Posts: 207
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Originally Posted by Duane
Yeow ow ow ow ow!
Wow wow wow wow wow!
Whoo hoo hoo hoo hoo!
Screamin' like a fucking zoo!
AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!
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HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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09-13-2008, 03:02 PM
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#43
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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Do Not Disrespect Poetry Inspired By The Power Of Rock!!!
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09-13-2008, 04:53 PM
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#44
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,678
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Originally Posted by Duane
Do Not Disrespect Poetry Inspired By The Power Of Rock!!!
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You even said this all in caps. Does the inspiration of rock know no limits?!
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09-13-2008, 05:08 PM
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#45
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Desert
Posts: 4,270
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Depends on the user, and on how much talent they have with using it.
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09-17-2008, 08:21 AM
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#46
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Campinas - SP - Brazil
Posts: 156
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Here we go ^^
I use to write some poetry but always in portuguese so I'll try to traslate close for you, I hope you enjoy =)
Original in portuguese:
O que te cerca solidão
Sempre de lonje, sempre nas sombras
Te vejo através dos vidros
Em outros comodos
Em outros livros
Os caminhos são sempre paralelos
Estou sempre tão perto...
...E tão longe de você
E as corujas olham ao redor
Ao meu eu ja sei decor
Pessoas e mais pessoas
Historias que não se cruzam
Te vejo em outros comodos
Em outros livros
Outros videos
Na noite escura
No céu infinito
No jardim ao lado
Nos braços da menina
que não sou eu
que nunca sou eu
aqui comigo
o que me cerca é solidão
você me vê?
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Translation:
Around you, loneliness
Always far, always in the shadows
I see you through the windows
In other rooms
In other books
The ways are just paralel
I am always so close...
...and so distant from you
And the owls are looking around
But around myself I already know
People and more people
Histories that never crossed
In other rooms
In other books
Other movies
At the night
In the infinite sky
At the neighbor's garden
In the arms of the girl
That is not me
That never is
and here with me
Around you, loneliness
Can you see me?
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PS: If I had write something wrong with grammar lol I appologize and please correct me...my english is not that good =)
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10-04-2008, 12:05 PM
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#47
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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I enjoyed it immensly ....sorry i haven't been on lately...it's random because the thought comes out of no where and the inspiration is invisible to my eyes...you are intitled to your opinion just as everyone is but be wise i won't try to control anyone or stop anything.
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10-04-2008, 12:10 PM
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#48
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,678
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
I enjoyed it immensly ....sorry i haven't been on lately...it's random because the thought comes out of no where and the inspiration is invisible to my eyes...you are intitled to your opinion just as everyone is but be wise i won't try to control anyone or stop anything.
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IT'S NOT FUCKING RANDOM TO THINK ABOUT DOING SOMETHING, AND THEN DO IT.
IF THAT WERE RANDOM, IF I WERE TO GO AND EAT SOMETHING BECAUSE I WAS HUNGRY, IT WOULD BE A RANDOM OCCURENCE.
IT FUCKING ISN'T.
Goddamn.
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10-04-2008, 12:12 PM
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#49
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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whatever you say god, whatever you say
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10-04-2008, 12:13 PM
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#50
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,678
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... I'm an omnipotent dictator purely because I know what words mean?
That's pretty sweet.
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