My Eternity

Nightwalker39 · 03-17-2011, 08:58 PM

Death in its complexity will wage war and rage
And whilst Eros persists, it is Thantos who prevails
Can't silence the skeptic that plagues the mind
Life and its longevity stretched before my eyes.

"The casket calls, put this demon to rest!
A heavy-hearted sigh heaved from my chest
The poison that tricks my vision, the cynic that shrieks
All hope remains hidden while desolation creeps.
Reduced to nothing but a willow weeping...
Too much love carelessly discarded, too many fantasies entertained
I crumble into depravity and my soul is stained."

Death whispers to me in his dulcet tones
Of a world underground for those whose life has left their bones,
A place where the restless sleep.
His cold breath on my neck causes a shiver to slither.
I long to reach out in a sombre embrace
His icy hands relieve me of life's lingering trace,
I breathe in his cloth of cobwebs and he closes my eyes,
No longer a spectator to life's horrors and lies,
As he lies me down on his soil-lined bed.

Death in its finery and splendour is all I could ask for
As I crush velvet between my fingertips and examine the well-polished wood.
So much time laid aside to honour my end,
For in this my eternity I shall spend.

Onyx_Rose · 03-17-2011, 09:14 PM

Why are you so persistent in writting these, you know they're just going to make fun of it. And I though you didn't like that. And know what your answer might be: "They can say all they like, I don't care. I'm here to post my poetry and express myself and my inner darkness..."

Despanan · 03-17-2011, 11:28 PM

Because it's Kontan trolling people.

Also, Kontan, I know you hate Metallica, but did you have to write an entire poem satarizing My Apocalypse? Because that song sucked enough on it's own.

Nightwalker39 · 03-18-2011, 11:21 AM

I do not know what you are talking about. Metallica is one of the best bands out there.

Versus · 03-18-2011, 10:12 PM

I wish Kontan would come back as Nightwalker39. That would be awesome.

Saya · 03-18-2011, 10:14 PM

When I saw the thread about him getting locked out, I assumed thats what he would do

Versus · 03-18-2011, 10:19 PM

Kontan was locked out?

Saya · 03-18-2011, 10:20 PM

well yeah, that's how he died. When you die in Gnet, you die in real life, right?

Versus · 03-18-2011, 10:28 PM

Wait. How did Kontan die? His insides weren't filled with uppercuts, were they? 'Cause that wasn't me.

peterfernandes238 · 03-20-2011, 09:16 PM

I just received my eternity ring from Eternity Wedding Bands - I cannot believe how beautiful my ring is. I was able to select the style,
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Peter

Nightwalker39 · 03-21-2011, 11:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Onyx_Rose

Why are you so persistent in writting these, you know they're just going to make fun of it. And I though you didn't like that. And know what your answer might be: "They can say all they like, I don't care. I'm here to post my poetry and express myself and my inner darkness..."

Not quite. Look i post because i want to. Because i want to see what other people think about it. And by that i mean professional opinions. Not trolling. And if they don not like it, thats their opinion.

Nayiry · 06-14-2011, 04:33 PM

this is the most mean forum i ever ran to in my virtual life!, that or i'm just stepping to the wrong topics...

you tried to picture the beauty of death for you...how it can relieve u...

but dont forget that sometimes u can find a beauty in the pain you live with...with all the lies and bad happenings...if life gave u pain..turn it into a masterpiece

although i was a little bit confused about the eternal thingy....keep writing

AshleyO · 06-14-2011, 07:35 PM

Nayiry. Are you slow? You keep interchanging "u" with "you". What's your problem? Looks to me that we have two choices here. You're either stupid or you're lazy. Which is it, sweetheart? ^_^

Murder.Of.Crows · 06-14-2011, 07:39 PM

I'm thinking she is stupid. Or likely a troll.

Nayiry · 06-14-2011, 08:23 PM

Ashley:stay there and guess u may develop UR judgmental attitude a bit

Murder of crows: wow...u have a mind to think with?

Nayiry · 06-14-2011, 08:24 PM

where we u people when God was distributing mind when he was creating people?
in the toilet? maybe that's why u r more loaded with shit than mind

Murder.Of.Crows · 06-14-2011, 08:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nayiry

where we u people when God was distributing mind when he was creating people?
in the toilet? maybe that's why u r more loaded with shit than mind

And this kids is what happens, when you ignore simple grammar. Unintelligible sentences. By the way, we're monkeys, not god juice.

Grausamkeit · 06-15-2011, 01:49 PM

And now for some real Poe in a tree!

Meditations on Turning Eight
by Lisa Simpson

I had a cat named Snowball
She died! She died!
Mom said she was sleeping
She lied! She lied!
Why oh why is my cat dead?
Couldn't that Chrysler hit me instead?

That's some real shit right there, yo!

MissCheyenne · 06-15-2011, 02:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nayiry

where we u people when God was distributing mind when he was creating people?
in the toilet? maybe that's why u r more loaded with shit than mind

WHAT IS THIS?!?!?!? Kill it, kill it with FIRE.

Peter Jackal · 06-17-2011, 10:56 AM

Thank you for sharing, Nightwalker39. I like poems about death.

Here's one of mine, but I have to admit, the tone is slightly less reverential than that in your nobly crafted verse:

If Death is a lover
Who'll not be denied,
That makes Him a rapist
In search of a ride

So that's where you'll find me
At the the end of my time:
With Death's cock in my arse.
That's the end of my rhyme

Peter x

gothicgoddess9 · 06-19-2011, 09:57 PM

i miss you :/ i no thats not about the poetry but ya i still do miss you a lot and today was my birthday and you didnt even say happy birthday