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Old 02-04-2009, 05:03 PM   #1
Sir Canvas Corpsey
 
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True Gestalt

This is something I wrote as a stepping stone to something bigger that I was talking about with Wednesday last night, i want any and all criticism you can offer. The bastard site won't register the unique spacing for the lines...


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The lines of distinction have always been blurred

If I dream I am a butterfly

and cannot tell the difference
between that dream and life
does that mean I should be a butterfly?

Or am I just living
a conscious and subconscious delusion?

I can no longer discern between
reason-and-instinct

your perseverance is a testament to your
EGO

To be honest, I don’t think

the lines were separate to begin with.
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