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Forum: Literature 10-13-2010, 06:19 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,631
Posted By magnus13
and I appreciate it, and would like your opinion...

and I appreciate it, and would like your opinion of something with a more complex ryme scheme, will post something in the future when I have time to dig through my stuff for something I think is...
Forum: Literature 10-13-2010, 12:39 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 5,263
Posted By magnus13
william gibson

william gibson
Forum: Literature 10-13-2010, 11:02 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,793
Posted By magnus13
I gotta agree with Apathys child about the...

I gotta agree with Apathys child about the syllable stress. I kinda like "no one talks like that anymore" though.
Forum: Literature 10-13-2010, 09:40 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,056
Posted By magnus13
well you made me laugh, although I dont think...

well you made me laugh, although I dont think it's in the running for funniest poem either. :)
Forum: Literature 10-13-2010, 09:37 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,763
Posted By magnus13
A little too chaotic for me this time, kinda hard...

A little too chaotic for me this time, kinda hard to read. sorry, obviously some emotion tide up in that one.
Forum: Literature 10-13-2010, 09:31 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,631
Posted By magnus13
LOL, sinjob just following me around hopeing...

LOL, sinjob just following me around hopeing someone will quote some obnoxious trash he talks cause he knows I put him on the ignore list. THATS funny.

@ versus, next time I'll try to post...
Forum: Whining 10-12-2010, 09:36 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
that kinda sucks about the p.m. function, ah well.

that kinda sucks about the p.m. function, ah well.
Forum: Whining 10-12-2010, 09:35 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
to quote another fictional character (mostley...

to quote another fictional character (mostley because I think it's a clever line)

"life is like an onion, cut out the bad parts and the rest is still good" - Vlad Taltos, assassin for hire

but...
Forum: Literature 10-12-2010, 05:39 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,631
Posted By magnus13
no ? three things that can bring joy, if i see a...

no ? three things that can bring joy, if i see a child laugh, my lover sigh or a bird fly,I experiance a similiar joy. too personal a symbolism maybe, the joy of flight not as common as I had assumed...
Forum: Whining 10-12-2010, 03:43 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
I dont want a free ride, I just dont see where...

I dont want a free ride, I just dont see where you can call a who wins the burn fest compition intelligent conversation amoung friends. I'm not into it, and not going to be part of it. So if people...
Forum: Literature 10-12-2010, 02:42 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,631
Posted By magnus13
@ versus, sure if it's put forward in a polite...

@ versus, sure if it's put forward in a polite and constructive manner, or if its mocking with a lot of silly grinning emotocons to show you dont mean it. :)

on the meaning, it's about a...
Forum: Literature 10-12-2010, 01:40 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,631
Posted By magnus13
the wall -a poem

there is a wall in a dim dry land
that was raised up by no mortal hand

beyond that place no bird will fly
no children laugh, no lovers sigh

none there worries on what might be
the end is...
Forum: Literature 10-12-2010, 01:10 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,628
Posted By magnus13
cool, I don't do well at narative proes myself,...

cool, I don't do well at narative proes myself, the dialog part is just beyond me. anyone who can write dialog and not make it sound contrived has my eternal respect.
Forum: Literature 10-12-2010, 01:02 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,628
Posted By magnus13
thats cool I throw 9/10ths of what I write in the...

thats cool I throw 9/10ths of what I write in the trash, or it never even makes it to paper.
Forum: Literature 10-12-2010, 12:50 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,628
Posted By magnus13
not bad, I like the last stansa. somehow I think...

not bad, I like the last stansa. somehow I think it would make a good corus/refrain for a song. perhaps lost freedom of mind or caress of the darkness to balance out the rythm a little ?
Forum: Whining 10-12-2010, 12:03 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
yeah and I'll admit I have a bit of a hair...

yeah and I'll admit I have a bit of a hair trigger temper, I work on it, I really do. :D
@ Isaloween , I'll hang for awhile, If you feel the need to chat with a kindred spirit feel free to P.M. me,...
Forum: Whining 10-11-2010, 10:31 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
@ twitch, again I'll take your advice sir. again...

@ twitch, again I'll take your advice sir. again your correct in that it is not worth getting upset. I have no intention of ignoring anyone who dosnt choose to be needlessly antagonistic.
Forum: Whining 10-11-2010, 10:28 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
i dont know , dont think so. truth is I'm stuck...

i dont know , dont think so. truth is I'm stuck in this little town where i know nobody and I had this Idea to go meet people on the internet, not big into boardsor chat rooms in general, so I am...
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 10:02 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
and im done, I hearby promise not to post in your...

and im done, I hearby promise not to post in your lovely politics section ever again.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 10:00 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
and "a favorite among anarcho capatalists and...

and "a favorite among anarcho capatalists and facists" that I dont know either, it is however one of my favorite books, and I can't understand what a facist would find pleasant about it. ( I though...
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 09:54 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
I put people on iognore for acting in a fashion I...

I put people on iognore for acting in a fashion I found infentile. I would have liked to have had a inteligent conversation but people would rather just hurl insults and say I'm makeing all kinds of...
Forum: Whining 10-11-2010, 09:45 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
thanks twitch, it's good to hear. I shall...

thanks twitch, it's good to hear. I shall endevour to not let the losers drive me away before I get to know people.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 08:42 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
Sin , last time I'll bother, grow up, I was...

Sin , last time I'll bother, grow up, I was trying to help YOU, maybe you will realize that when your older. and welcome to the ignore list.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 08:21 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
sin ! I am impressed and retract my earlier...

sin ! I am impressed and retract my earlier remark.
alan, welcome to the ignore file.
Forum: Whining 10-11-2010, 08:04 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
perhaps my reaction to the abuse heaped upon the...

perhaps my reaction to the abuse heaped upon the silly and ignorant here is excesive, but there it is. Perhaps I just shouldn't try to communicate with other humans whilst doing ugly math.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 08:00 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
R.H. Heinlein

R.H. Heinlein
Forum: Whining 10-11-2010, 07:59 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 4,955
Posted By magnus13
what happened to my world ?? :(

omg, goth ? what happened ? when I lived in chicago and hung out in the goth scene and such, "goths" were the coolest folks I'de ever met. Sure we all looked scary but we were damn good people, NICE...
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 07:53 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
look alan, it's not gonna do to say "stupid" I'm...

look alan, it's not gonna do to say "stupid" I'm trying here man, but your starting shit.

sin, do you find it necessary to pick on a 12 year old who could prolly use your help to figure some...
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 07:30 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
oh and I apologize for calling you names, you got...

oh and I apologize for calling you names, you got me steemed, sorry.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 07:28 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
WHAT ?!? oh i give up. just you know bro, tone,...

WHAT ?!? oh i give up. just you know bro, tone, try to be friendly. we kwl ?
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 07:20 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
I was not trying to arbitrate anything, dont...

I was not trying to arbitrate anything, dont fucking put words in my mouth you pushy fucker.
the phrase "rational anarchism" was coined by Heinlein in a book, (dont believe me google it) I...
Forum: Literature 10-11-2010, 06:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,456
Posted By magnus13
the very song that first turned me on to the...

the very song that first turned me on to the poem. :)
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 06:29 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
really ? I thought classic liberal thought had to...

really ? I thought classic liberal thought had to do with responsibilty to society and sacrificing for the common good, etc. I have heard very little of liberal politicians toteing the virtues of...
Forum: General 10-11-2010, 06:23 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 6,872
Posted By magnus13
@ HavelockV , well spoken, had not even known of...

@ HavelockV , well spoken, had not even known of the sequel but your arguement boils down to my own opinion. The story was over, and it had a rare thing in literature (imho) a very good ending, leave...
Forum: General 10-11-2010, 04:24 PM
Replies: 105
Views: 17,489
Posted By magnus13
ew irish wiskey. <shudders> I must quote a monty...

ew irish wiskey. <shudders> I must quote a monty python sketch "if it's not scottish, it's crap.

I rarley drink alchohol, but appreciate a good single malt scotch.

if I want to drink a beer...
Forum: Spooky News 10-11-2010, 03:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,454
Posted By magnus13
thank you raptor, that is indead awsome. brown...

thank you raptor, that is indead awsome. brown dwarf so that the star didn't blot out the planet, boy those astronomers are clever arn't they ? :)
Forum: General 10-11-2010, 03:27 PM
Replies: 385
Views: 40,179
Posted By magnus13
boy it really is funny watching this goku guy try...

boy it really is funny watching this goku guy try to spell.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 12:54 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
a quote from the book “A rational anarchist...

a quote from the book
“A rational anarchist believes that concepts such as ‘state’ and ‘society’ and ‘government’ have no existence save as physically exemplified in the acts of self-responsible...
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 12:41 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
from a book by my favorite sci-fi author. mostley...

from a book by my favorite sci-fi author. mostley I agree with kontankarite, twitch has some good ideas but fails to take into account human nature.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 12:39 PM
Replies: 133
Views: 34,672
Posted By magnus13
it's more culturalism (which I dont think is a...

it's more culturalism (which I dont think is a word) than racism, but it is unquestionably prejudice against a cultural/religious group.
Forum: Politics 10-11-2010, 12:30 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 12,403
Posted By magnus13
rational anarchy- government is a necessary evil

rational anarchy- government is a necessary evil
Forum: Literature 10-11-2010, 12:02 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,456
Posted By magnus13
one of my favorite poems

Kubla-Khan - Samuel Taylor Coleridge


In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure-dome decree:
Where Alph, the sacred river, ran
Through caverns measureless to man
Down to a sunless sea.
So...
Forum: Spooky News 10-11-2010, 10:50 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,454
Posted By magnus13
well this is kind of old news, but yes very very...

well this is kind of old news, but yes very very exciting. I cant wait till they build a big enoough space telescope to image these planets, even seeing a gas giant actually orbiting another star...
Forum: Literature 10-11-2010, 10:11 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,871
Posted By magnus13
sure the ryme scheme is a little week but the...

sure the ryme scheme is a little week but the imagry is good. it's not THAT bad.
Forum: Music 10-11-2010, 10:00 AM
Replies: 47
Views: 10,858
Posted By magnus13
when I'm really down ? annie lennox

when I'm really down ? annie lennox
Forum: Music 10-11-2010, 09:55 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 9,654
Posted By magnus13
the stereo :D

the stereo :D
Forum: Literature 10-11-2010, 09:50 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 3,776
Posted By magnus13
darkemostar, honestly I dont much care for it,...

darkemostar, honestly I dont much care for it, but then I dont much care for a lot of free verse, so take that with a grain of salt. Mostly I just wanted to say the most important asset of anyone who...
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 10:22 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 8,014
Posted By magnus13
a damn good poem !

a damn good poem !
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 10:09 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,420
Posted By magnus13
actually I think azareal crow just changing the...

actually I think azareal crow just changing the order helps it alot, not bad that way. i think you need to read your stuff aloud to yourself, get an idea of the rythm and then rewrite, just a thought.
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 10:00 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,842
Posted By magnus13
I like the first one. as for the second, it has...

I like the first one. as for the second, it has potential, perhaps a rewrite or two would help you fix the meter a little ? also a more complex ryme scheme might help it a little ?
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 09:26 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 9,312
Posted By magnus13
good stuff, I read your reviews of some of the...

good stuff, I read your reviews of some of the other stuff posted and went looking for your work, now I am gonna go find more. :)
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 09:21 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 4,915
Posted By magnus13
not bad, and i think the meaning rather obvious....

not bad, and i think the meaning rather obvious. I write 9/10 of my poetry when I'm upset or mixed up and most of it is terrible, but it still helps ME. :)
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 09:17 PM
Replies: 7
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Views: 2,280
Posted By magnus13
@ TheFeatheredÆtheling... bravo!!

@ TheFeatheredÆtheling... bravo!!
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 09:14 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,710
Posted By magnus13
not bad at all.

not bad at all.
Forum: Literature 10-10-2010, 08:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,460
Posted By magnus13
atlantis- a poem

well being new to the site I thought i'de post one of my poems and give you all a chance to mock me. :D


Atlantis
I see the ancient land unfold
wrought as if of shining gold
bright light...
Forum: Introductions 10-10-2010, 08:36 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,473
Posted By magnus13
well i am ecclectic so it would be a long list,...

well i am ecclectic so it would be a long list, sticking to the "goth" side of things. type-o, peter murphy/bauhaus, S.O.M. , cruxshadows......
also on the not goth side the G.D., niel young, black...
Forum: Introductions 10-10-2010, 08:13 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,473
Posted By magnus13
'ello

hmmm... well lets just copy those questions and answer 'em one by one shall we ?
1. What do you do? (Hobbies, job) well right now I'm going to grad school, this is not an attempt to better myself,...
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