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02-11-2008, 12:22 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: hell
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I has written a poem
I think it is really good.
I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.
I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.
I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.
I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.
I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.
I hate everything and I want you all to die.
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02-11-2008, 12:24 PM
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#2
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Behind a keyboard.
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Bwahahahahahaha!!!
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02-11-2008, 12:26 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: hell
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black sheep ?
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02-11-2008, 12:29 PM
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#4
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Behind a keyboard.
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Let's start an imaginary band!
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02-11-2008, 12:31 PM
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#5
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: hell
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why imaginary
man we can take over the world and sing and dance and do drugs and die.
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02-11-2008, 12:34 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 24
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Originally Posted by Darky Poppins
I think it is really good.
I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.
I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.
I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.
I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.
I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.
I hate everything and I want you all to die.
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*wipes tear with black hankie.
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02-11-2008, 12:43 PM
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#7
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 102
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Originally Posted by Goth Sentinel
*wipes tear with black hankie.
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Fuckin sycophant
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02-11-2008, 12:49 PM
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#8
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 24
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Fuck off I'm a Giraffe.
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02-11-2008, 02:19 PM
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#9
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Earth.
Posts: 8,001
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This is probably Rosie in disguise or something.
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02-11-2008, 02:21 PM
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 2,126
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Who the hell is Rosie?
I've been working too much recently to keep up with the shit on the net.
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02-11-2008, 02:31 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: A whales Virgina
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Originally Posted by Underwater Ophelia
This is probably Rosie in disguise or something.
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My thought exactly but I could not say it first
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Must have been a dream from a thousand years ago...swear I didnt meant it....swear it wasnt meant to be.
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Originally Posted by Duane
Oh shit!!!*tries to run away, but trips, he breaks his neck on a stool*No I know how Hilary Swank feels like.
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02-11-2008, 02:35 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Behind a keyboard.
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S'not. These guys are cool.
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02-11-2008, 02:53 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: A whales Virgina
Posts: 787
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Im going to have to punish you.
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Must have been a dream from a thousand years ago...swear I didnt meant it....swear it wasnt meant to be.
Aim: K143rsjrp
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Originally Posted by Duane
Oh shit!!!*tries to run away, but trips, he breaks his neck on a stool*No I know how Hilary Swank feels like.
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02-11-2008, 03:09 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Washington
Posts: 1,092
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We have a literature section for talentless shit like this.
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02-11-2008, 03:15 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Calgary AB 0_o
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Why is there a sudden troll infestation...?
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02-11-2008, 03:29 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Oviedo, FL
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Originally Posted by Clockwork
We have a literature section for talentless shit like this.
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Deuche. Thats all i have to say to that comment.
I personally liked it. It could be more interesting though, if you like to write you should improve as you practice.
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02-11-2008, 03:35 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Earth.
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It's "douche," you dumbass.
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02-11-2008, 03:40 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Washington
Posts: 1,092
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Originally Posted by Darklight689
Thats all i have to say
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I'm relieved. You should keep that in practice.
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02-11-2008, 05:41 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Oviedo, FL
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I dont care imma bad speller. But the need to tear apart every writer who decides to post stuff on this board is kind of pathetic. You two sound like the common everyday jackass. I go to highschool for that kind of immature nonsense.
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02-11-2008, 05:58 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Washington
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You're reacting as if I insulted a poem you wrote. I honestly doubt Darky Poppins cares, because the poem looks like it's intended as a joke.
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02-11-2008, 07:17 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Fascination Street
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Tsk, tsk... everyone knows that Robert favours red lipstick.
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02-12-2008, 12:49 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Temple of Love
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Originally Posted by Darky Poppins
I think it is really good.
I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.
I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.
I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.
I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.
I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.
I hate everything and I want you all to die.
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We have a literary section, mate. That was crap by the way.
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02-12-2008, 12:10 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Oviedo, FL
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Originally Posted by Clockwork
You're reacting as if I insulted a poem you wrote. I honestly doubt Darky Poppins cares, because the poem looks like it's intended as a joke.
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im just sick of stuff like that.
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02-12-2008, 02:14 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Earth.
Posts: 8,001
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Originally Posted by Ravenmother
Then leave. That's what this place is for. We as a sub-group are very Intellectual. Critical as well. I agree. There is a section for literature. I would have to agree though, that it does seem a little like a joke. If not, then a bit of work is in order.
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Uh, we as a sub-group are not very intellectual. There are, of course, intellectual goths, but it isn't like all--or even most--goths are smarter than average folk.
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02-12-2008, 02:42 PM
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#25
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Phillips Exeter Academy, NH
Posts: 1,429
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Originally Posted by Darklight689
Deuche. Thats all i have to say to that comment.
I personally liked it. It could be more interesting though, if you like to write you should improve as you practice.
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That's actually a very creative way of spelling "douche".
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