Blood Legacy

[cradle]

I put my mouth against her neck, teeth sinking into her almost marble skin, blood trickling down her shoulder. A short but deep grunt came out of my mouth as i let go, almost a sigh of relief as I had just taken another soul.

Death became her as she fell to the hard ground...I saw no end to this blood legacy, and neither shall man kind.

I stood upon the rooftops of the european landscape looking over the city, I found myself content to my liking, just another blood sucker, just another soulless shell.

I tried all my life to fill up the the hole in which depression made it's nest.
I tried to drown it in blood, drown it in other people's life source.

The depression that nested into a deep hole in my soul was caused by the ignorant men who, in turn, shall feel my wrath upon their lives, they shall feel the cold wings of vengeance upon their souls.

[Crying_Crimson_Tears]

I love it. You are so brilliant kid. I absolutely love this. You are doing a wonderful job, you should continue.

[Godslayer Jillian]

To be honest, I'm not liking where it's heading. It may be that it's too predictable, or the choice of words is kind of repetitive and leaves the scenery undetailed.

[Macabre]

I agree, it does seem predictable and not very detailed. Then again, i'm not much of a "Vampire" fan (which is what i assume this story to be built around) so maybe it's just me. Have you done any more work to this?

[cradle]

No...I started on Dragonlord.