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Forum: Politics 06-20-2007, 01:01 PM
Replies: 133
Views: 13,450
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Mr Show is God.

Mr Show is God.
Forum: Politics 06-19-2007, 11:05 PM
Replies: 133
Views: 13,450
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
It's a blowjobocracy, man, not meritocracy. If...

It's a blowjobocracy, man, not meritocracy. If only..
Forum: Politics 06-19-2007, 11:03 PM
Replies: 133
Views: 13,450
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Hey I had a brainstorm last night at the gas...

Hey I had a brainstorm last night at the gas station.

Reactive Politics

Instead of a political identity (democrat, republican, green etc..) with set mores and ideologies, you would have...
Forum: Literature 06-19-2007, 10:56 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,849
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I like your descriptions a lot, especially when...

I like your descriptions a lot, especially when they're pitiless. I thought it was interesting that instead of sex, flirtation or anything of the sort you have a musical performance being heard which...
Forum: Spooky News 06-19-2007, 01:15 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,159
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
The Albom interview must have taken place before...

The Albom interview must have taken place before Wallaces'. If Jack Kevorkian lives up to his political rebellion he should aspire to make these ideas more palatable to the sensibilities of peoples...
Forum: Literature 06-18-2007, 12:18 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,351
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I like the codependence of ingestion imagery and...

I like the codependence of ingestion imagery and religious imagery. and i think this line is particularly effective:

The rotten core of a bitter heart left on a burning sleeve,

because the...
Forum: Literature 06-16-2007, 11:33 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,725
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I really liked that poem. Both as a whole and...

I really liked that poem. Both as a whole and certain individual lines stuck out including the aforementioned 'my dreams play god' because of its ambiguity. The one line has so many complicated...
Forum: Literature 06-16-2007, 12:02 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,517
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I will. I'm sorry. I just advise against elderly...

I will. I'm sorry. I just advise against elderly language. There's a reason why people don't talk like that anymore.

Also, do you actually feel like your 'skin is being invaded' because someone...
Forum: Literature 06-15-2007, 11:51 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,486
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I was merely making suggestions. There is though...

I was merely making suggestions. There is though that impulse to take another person and turn them into one's own reflection. Look at what Charlie Manson did, look at the Evangelicals, and the...
Forum: Shill 06-15-2007, 11:42 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,681
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I don't go about ruining integrity. What do you...

I don't go about ruining integrity. What do you think of me? No. It's just impossible to talk about yourself honestly in my opinion.

And if you've been to the psyche ward, you know well enough to...
Forum: Shill 06-15-2007, 01:01 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,681
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Nothing is honest. The point is to turn a memoir...

Nothing is honest. The point is to turn a memoir into a fiction. The point is to turn a diary into a work of art.

If anyone was capable of it, it wouldn't be art. And it still wouldn't be honest.
Forum: Literature 06-15-2007, 11:19 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,318
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
The Risperdal Song

I am godlike, void of scruples. i am children’s guns in school. whoever is not with me is against me. whosoever does not gather with me scatters. with a passion for apathy my army of innocence...
Forum: Literature 06-15-2007, 11:15 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,486
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Yes, it's true. I'm uncomfortable in my own skin....

Yes, it's true. I'm uncomfortable in my own skin. I'm always trying to jump out of it, in one manner or another. But I'm comfortable being uncomfortable in my own skin. I've learned to work with it....
Forum: Literature 06-15-2007, 11:08 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,517
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
-But I'm simply inspired by Shakespeare and...

-But I'm simply inspired by Shakespeare and Sappho.-

It's okay to be inspired by Shakespeare and Sappho, but it makes no more sense to write in Shakespeare's dialect, than it does to learn Ancient...
Forum: Shill 06-14-2007, 11:13 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,681
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
As far as life advice goes, you need to steer...

As far as life advice goes, you need to steer clear of psych wards because you're not schizophrenic, and they truly are hell. The things I'd like to see brought out more is the misunderstandings...
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 08:30 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,486
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Beauticle

we were meant to be
indented genuinely
impressed scenes frame
puppets on stage
spotlights in side
everything feels laced.
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 08:20 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,517
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Okay, there are a few poems that popped into my...

Okay, there are a few poems that popped into my head as I was reading yours. The first is the Kraken by Alfred Lord Tennyson, which is about the sea monster which Poseidon unleeshes on cities to be...
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 07:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,681
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Then you don't have to worry about rewriting the...

Then you don't have to worry about rewriting the same story over and over again, which is a good thing. The next piece of the puzzle is to create a greater context for your characters. What's the...
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 07:08 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,997
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I've read Faulkner's the Sound and Fury. I have...

I've read Faulkner's the Sound and Fury. I have not read Flannery O'Connor nor Tennessee Williams. I'm interested in checking out Flannery O'Connor. I guess I probably should. I just never got around...
Forum: Spooky News 06-14-2007, 02:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,159
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I agree with you completely, but what ends up...

I agree with you completely, but what ends up happening is that the attatchments of the family interfere with what is clearly the right thing to do, and if it isn't the family who in my opinion...
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 11:50 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,681
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I think your sense of flow and rhythm (flow on...

I think your sense of flow and rhythm (flow on the level of the story itself, and rhythm in terms timing with language, the way your setences sound) is a real strength to this piece. It's also wise...
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 11:34 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,708
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Haha

[onthewall] the first child is in love with the second child is in love with the third child is in love with the fourth child is in love with a fifth child is in love with the sixth child is in love...
Forum: Shill 06-14-2007, 11:04 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,681
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Post the link for Christ's sake! oh, and how...

Post the link for Christ's sake!

oh, and how about:

A Wonderous Numbness

I'm just kidding. To be honest with you, memoirs don't require titles, they require dates.
Forum: Literature 06-14-2007, 11:01 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,336
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Absolutely. A lot of schizo-affective...

Absolutely.

A lot of schizo-affective symptoms are present in sleeping disorders and other non-chemical illnesses. But one thing I'll say right off the bat is that you'd be better off in the...
Forum: Spooky News 06-14-2007, 10:24 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,159
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Jack Kevorkian

Mitch Albom, the acclaimed journalist and fiction writer did an op ed interview with Jack Kevorkian and found him to be among the most bitter dried up and cold and heartless humans on this side of...
Forum: Introductions 06-14-2007, 10:16 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,433
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
There are actually African tribes that bury their...

There are actually African tribes that bury their deceased on the outskirts of their villages, and wait for the flesh to rot off, then exhume the corpse and stick it in their house. The belief is...
Forum: Literature 06-13-2007, 11:49 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,680
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Well

I don't know that anybody ever made any money off it to be truthful. Most of the talented poets whose voices we hear were from wealthy aristocratic families and could afford to spend their entire day...
Forum: Literature 06-13-2007, 11:35 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,081
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Christ Almighty

The intro questions were not in the intro thread by the time I replied to Aaroneet, therefore I could not answer. I apologize, I didn't read the instructions, and should have introduced myself. I...
Forum: Introductions 06-13-2007, 11:15 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,433
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
1. What do you do? (Hobbies, job) For money...

1. What do you do? (Hobbies, job)

For money I work at a gas station. For fun I write lots of poems, fiction.

2. Where are you from?

Buffalo NY

3. Who is your favorite author?
Forum: Literature 06-12-2007, 10:53 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,850
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Is that a prophesy (british spelling) or a prayer?

Is that a prophesy (british spelling) or a prayer?
Forum: Literature 06-12-2007, 10:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,680
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Punctuation is dead, my dear. I killed it myself....

Punctuation is dead, my dear. I killed it myself. Though you'd be hard pressed to find a misspelled word. Capitalizing is irrelevant. Nobody makes money on poetry anymore.
Forum: Literature 06-12-2007, 10:18 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,081
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
The weird thing is, when you make the language...

The weird thing is, when you make the language simpler, the poem will become more complex. If something is complicated it is so because it is made more difficult than need be. It becomes more of a...
Forum: Introductions 06-12-2007, 10:01 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,433
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I am me

I dunno what to say besides hi. my vitals are abnormal. i am at slightly higher risk of breast cancer than the average man of twenty-nine, because I smoke seven packs of Chesterfields an hour and I...
Forum: Literature 06-12-2007, 12:56 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,081
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
I checked out your profile. Your age surprises...

I checked out your profile. Your age surprises me. You've managed with this poem to achieve a sort of irridescence with your wording and line breaks that allows the poem to have a sense of itself...
Forum: Literature 06-12-2007, 09:31 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,680
Posted By Mookie Lugubrious
Infelicities

i weep over you. tears that rage against me. & you come into being. from an empty heaven. empty as the wind. on skin. we’ll never move out of. alarm.

between language and pain. no longer the word...
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